Enjoyed the story, but it would have been better if Sirius had looked at the dang newspaper clippings while Remus was still with him and then they could have made a plan to catch Wormtail. I just have to assume there is a method to your madness, but I’m telling you that if Sirius gets killed off in later sequels, I will be a unhappy camper.

Great story, but FYI, you can’t learn to drive in the UK until you are 17, not 15 like the States.

And Elvis has left the story ladies and gentlemen!

I wonder if Ron is now over his fear of spiders

Talk about a cliffie!

Your imagination is not faulty.

Great use of the song!

Thought I recognized Klingon

I absolutely loved all the different adventures in this one. Poor Ron (and Harry eventually) with the Acromantula and the green hair lol, though I do wonder what it was that made the hair go that color. That ship. Wow. I would love to see a viking ship like that and yay to Ginny for the drums lol.

The Bug and the Vespas were great...and again, poor Ron. At least it's a less disturbing way to get a new wand lol.

I liked the new houses for the Potters to check out, though the one really needs a renovation rotflmao. Telling Knop to let people he doesn't want to see wait there lmao.

With everything else that happened, leave it to Harry to get an elfling childs disease...ooh, does that mean that with the transfusion Harry (and maybe Hermione and Ginny) will be able to access house elf magic now? That would be so cool as an upside to the illness lol.

Great. We're back to Sirius supposedly wanting to kill Harry lol.

I'm so glad that Myrtle and Joshua have someone to talk to after everything that happened to them. The quarters that Vika created for them and the painting/door where Myrtle/Joshua and the others could go into and guard them was great, as was the painting for the Founders to come visit.

And another bites the dust. You seem to be a master of stretching out time for more content, without leaving said content stale or repetitive. Well done once more, and can't wait on the next one.

Oi!
You don't half end on a Cliff-Hanger, do you?
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Hermione's middle name is Jean not jane! Jane was umbridge's middle name.

Just cant be rid of stupid songs, can you ? Jamming in singing crap is another mark of crappy fanfic.

Eh, lots of summer fluff and tons of dancing around the issue of sticking it in as if it were some pinnacle of intimacy and all the other hanky panky they got around to all the time counted for nothing. Its probably a very good idea to keep the vacations in separate books from school years and all the story progress happening there.

I like your stories, but they need to be heavily edited for typos, grammar, and consistency. Bill was at Potter Manor when Harry explained the whole chamber of secrets thing. Ginny's birthday gift of self-inking quills, when you wrote they where going to be using fountain pens. The fact Mrs. Weasley already knows about their sleeping arraignment. These all detract from your overall good writing.