Reviews for The Marriage
Sulfurea chapter 4 . 6/8/2019
I was starting to get worried, you know! I've never used so many tissues in my whole life while reading fanfiction, you're the first!
You really had me hooked on all the way, you got me to feel every single feeling in your work; each one of them! I was angry at Sasuke for not speaking but felt guilty aftwerwards when the first date came up, sad with Naruto when he left but quite angry with him too for not telling Sasuke about his problems, so anxious at the moment of Naruto's choice that I couldn't feel my fingers anymore, and finally shared Sasuke's relief and happiness when Naruto said he loved him more. I shouted so loud my little sister got scared, but I couldn't help it! Even now, I'm as happy as I could ever be while writing...
I just can't find anything I didn't like!
Honestly, when it looked like Naruto was hopelessly in love with Sakura (or so it looked to me), I thought it was another corny fanfic with impossible events; Hell was I wrong! Terribly wrong!
I absolutely loved it! Every word you wrote, it was AMAZING!
(Ooof, this review is long af, lmao)
sgriffin730 chapter 1 . 10/20/2018
its been over a year please update...hot story
emowoods205 chapter 4 . 1/18/2018
Now that I'm saw Sasukes side of their first date he was nervous and worried as hell too he just hid it because of his stupid Uchiha pride! Sasuke always loved Naruto so deeply he just never really knew how to tell it to Naruto he would show it in his actions which was easier for the raven...I wish Sasuke had smiled instead of smirked on their first date and that Naruto had noticed Sasukes book was upside down... (I'm so fucking relieved Naruto chose rightfully...3) I'm so fucking glad they finally have a healthy open relationship with more communication then ever! Sasuke finally let Naruto in to see the real him and Naruto is finally telling Sasuke of how he's always felt...3 (I love how desparate they were to be with each other again both romantically and sexually the love making was so very beautiful and intense...I was crying in joy for the two...for their happiness...) I love how honest and open they were with their emotions before/Durning/after their love making... (Honestly this entire fanfic had me crying and on edge I hate misunderstandings and this was all a bunch of misunderstandings...) I don't know if you know blackbear...but this fanfic reminds me of blackbear-Deadroses... (Is it strange I sorta wish this was an Mpreg so Naruto could get pregnant...?) I was so happy for some odd reason when Sasuke noticed Narutos insecurity and Naruto got to see Sasukes emotions so free and open...And then when Naruto showed his vulnerability and cried in front of Sasuke...oh and when Sasuke told Naruto how much he loved the blond...and when Sasuke confessed to being nervous wreck on their first date...awee Sasuke said 'fuck pride' he loves Naruto too much for that...Sasuke smiled a genuine smile in front of Naruto...3...This book is amazing I can't wait to read the sequel!
emowoods205 chapter 3 . 1/18/2018
So Naruto is the one who started the relationship...on an accident...XD that's so Naruto...The problem with their relationship was that Naruto was so insecure and unsure of everything about Sasuke... because Sasuke never assured him...Sasuke was always so confusing to the blond because he never truly opened up to the blond...from the start of there relationship Naruto felt like Sasuke didn't even really care...even in the first date...Poor Naruto with his forced smiles and feeling of agony on the inside..hiding it behind flimsy smile... (I think the main thing that was making their relationship so toxic and that eventually ended their relationship was neglect of communication with each other...they lacked communication...on how they felt...they are supposed to tell each other everything...but they were both so closed off...at least Naruto would say he loved Sasuke though...) It made me cry at seeing how much in love Naruto was with Sasuke from the beginning...so deeply in love... (It really warmed my heart when Kiba was talking about how why Naruto was marrying Sakura when it was clear he loved Sasuke...I love Kiba! -And KibaNaruI just think Sasuke should have held Naruto and told him that he loves him...that he won't let him be taken away...then everything could have been avoided...Naruto just wanted Sasuke to show he cared...loved...worried...for Naruto but he never showed it... (THEY FUCKING NEEDED TO COMMUNICATE!) it's so sad that Naruto was so desparate to be loved...cared for that he fell into Sakuras arms desparate for affection and love... (What the actual fuck Naruto!)
emowoods205 chapter 2 . 1/18/2018
Poor Sasuke it breaks my heart how sad and lonely he is without Naruto...I just don't get it if he really loved Naruto he should have been able to tell the blond that...he would have fought for the blond but he didn't...he just let him go...he should have been more open with Naruto but he wasn't...all he did was hold in his emotions and keep to himself...being cold to Naruto while he did so...the relationship was toxic...it hurt Naruto so much..the poor Uzumaki felt so unloved...but them being separated in such a way just made everything the more worse...but I guess it was also a good thing... because it made Sasuke snap out of it..I'm also thankful that Itachi gave Sasuke awake up call.. (Sakura is such a fucking bitch in this! How dare she give Sasuke a false address!) I'm just so glad Sasuke came and confessed to Naruto...I still can't believe out of the three years they were together Sasuke never told Naruto he loved him... (I'm honestly scared what Naruto will say...)
emowoods205 chapter 1 . 1/18/2018
That was some hot and steamy SasuNaru...they made love so passionately...if only Sasuke had just said 'i love you too'...Ok I guess NaruSaku isn't that bad but I was hoping for some SaiNaru or something...
Wei Wuxian Yiling Patriarch chapter 4 . 4/6/2017
Oh God so so so sweet.. This story was so mind blowing! A great idea and awesome storyline with so much passion
Fortune's Smile chapter 4 . 3/8/2017
You cruel, cruel, person! The cliffhangers in this fic nearly killed me! X)
You work really well with suspense. (Really, when Naruto said he loved Sakura, my lungs froze x) )
You're one of my favorite SasuNaru authors because the way you portray Sasuke and Naruto's relationship is really heartfelt. Like, they can't live without each other. And I love it! (#Avidfangirl :') ) oh, and have I mentioned that you're really good with descriptions? And I don't only mean in terms of lemons. (Though face is STILL red from that. :') )
So, thank you so much for writing and completing more SasuNaru goodness ; I really enjoyed this!
Fortune's Smile chapter 1 . 3/8/2017
Aaaah, no, what?! I've finished the prologue and I'm going to barrel through this story to get an explanation to why Sakura is sleeping beside Naruto instead of Sasuke x) (Though I'm 80% sure it has to do with Sasuke not being able to say 'I love you' back to Naruto...)
So, great work! I'm already hooked!
Sena Yashiro chapter 1 . 3/27/2016
Please, continue the sequel
bbyjellow chapter 4 . 3/21/2016
Ohmygod I cAN'T- actual idiots in love. They're totally smitten with each other. There's so much love and I was busy screaming to myself with all the tension when Sasuke had to drive everywhere to find the wedding venue. It was making me nervous! Honestly I was muttering "please make it make it make it istg if he didn't make it I will burn something". I love how you describe their feelings, how they think about each other, this is the perfect story about these idiots who love each other too much! Thank you for sharing this! 33
cadywise chapter 4 . 8/31/2015
You are literally one of the most amazing writers ever. I've been reading all your stories one after the other for a week now. Bravo! Bra-freaking-vo.
Your stories are just so fantastic, heart wrenching, vivid omg so many adjectives to chose from! You make me feel what each character is going through and I love it (even though my heart stops beating for the most part).
Do me (and the world) a favour and never stop writing. Continue to spread your genius.
Btw where's the sequel, I need more SasuNaru lovin!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/27/2015
hehe boy someones ganna die after the wedding*flips knife and catches it on handle **stalks sakura*
Guest chapter 2 . 3/29/2015
you write SO well! ahhh! :-)
Guest chapter 4 . 1/29/2015
Awesome! I cried so much!
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