That is phenomenal writing friend...drew me in at the very beginning, held me in anticipation and what an enticing ending... love it! :0)

you write so well! you must write another story! maybe make it longer!

I liked it, I feel like you really captured the essence of both with the few lines of dialogue. However, the random scene change to Winterfell kind of threw me off balance, not in a bad way, I just thought some more background would be nice.

A great work but so sad that you ended up so soon. I hope you will continue your story.
I'm not sure about your whole plot. Of course it's not a whole story line, there are just some episode from a very long story but I'm a bit confused. Everything happened so fast with no actual reason (or we don't no these reasons because you haven't told us yet :) ). Maybe some story supplement could help. :)

I'm looking forward your next Arya/Jaqun fanfiction! ;)

Brilliantly beautiful - I love it!

Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)

Then take a generous breath, dear author!

Yet another fabulous fic poetically depicting one of my favorite pairings. I must admit to being utterly in love with Jaqen. Oh how I'd love to taste the 'million(s of) spices and southern wine' of his kiss...that was a lovely description!

Wow! I just got chills reading this! I really hope you write more Arya Stark/Jaqen H'ghar fics. :)

omg, right out of my soul and mind. should totally happen like this in the series...*snif*

I just Love Jaqen and Arya. They surely belong togheter. Amazing.

I just loved it :) Though I would like to know what comes after!

Anyway, Arya/Jaqen are my favorite characters AND my ideal couple, so I'm glad to see people write about them.

"His voice was both silk and steel." - Such a simple sentence but the most perfectly accurate one!

I love Jaqen/Arya and I love the idea of him as a mentor. I'd love to read a Jaqen/Arya fic that wasn't a one shot though. I'd love to see the process that they go through to fall in love/lust

Fantastic! I wish there was more, but what you have written is fabulous by itself.

I love this pairing!

Great story, hope you write more. :)

Really well-written. I enjoyed every word :) And the title is so adequate. Are you going to continue this one or write another Jaquen/Arya story? I hope so ;)