When. Will. We. See. A. New. CHAPTER?!

buenas, feliz año nuevo, como van las ideas para continuar la historia?
Good morning, happy new year, how are the ideas to continue the story?

Look at it this way, T.T. This gives you a chance to tear through the other 48 chapters and see the improvements for yourself!

The story is written very well, except for the fact that the plot moves at the speed of a lethargic slug.

Overall the pace is too slow and the events up until this point lack any sense of excitement.

To be continued, with a 'd.'

Wow, that took too long to happen. Ten chapters before the actual crossover occurred.

The use of exclamation marks is a bit excessive.

Hope for more soon

Batman is a very intelligent man the technology might be higher than in his world but he can adjust with his genius level intellect, and ironic that he is in a world that Humans are obsolete because the majority of people are cyborgs you rarely see any natural Humans anymore.

Will Motoko and Batman be paired together because of the art picture of them? Just asking

Maaaan that Cecil is such a stiff... Finally Meila and Kei do the deed :)). But no lemons on this one, eh? Was just saying... Since you used them a lot on the other fic. Can't wait for the update. When will it come out?

I wonder when will Motoko put 2and 2together and realize it was Superman who helped Batman escape that night. Or...will anyone ask Superman to bring Batman to face justice? Lol that would be funny.

This was interesting...the meet between Kei and Motoko. And the fact that Motoko had to break a few laws to get a criminal...maybe this experience will teach her that fighting within the law does not work against every criminal. And the Phantom cannot be caught like that. She needs to go outside the law...or trust Batman to do the dirty work.

It's a wonder Bruce manages to have a relationship as well. Took him a trip to a different world to get one lol. Still... the more i read, the more i must disagree with how Superman approached things: revealing his identity...accepting to be bossed around... i mean one should help because he wants to. But if he gets pushed around by others, that ticks me off. Soi can't say i agree with him. Especiaally since the enemy knows who he is, and also what. Hopefully no more than that.