This was lovely, bittersweet and hot. Thank you for sharing. 333

Very nice.

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Nicely written, I do recommend you have someone beta-read, for the slight errors you oversee yourself (that happens to all of us.. I have a beta-reader for all of my uni-papers even..)

Other than that; very nice. I like how you seem to keep the whole 'piano bar vibe' throughout the story. Good job!