Oh my gosh. This so cool. I'm pulled in to your world. Give me more!

WTF is this bullcrap? It's terrible!

This really, really, REALLY bites... Just like the rest of your mega-magic Pieces of B/X fantasy crap... besides, Xander's not a vampire, therefore that coupling is im-bloody-possible, knowing Buffy's preference of men.

BTW, I am a proud B/S fan and will be. And you and the two B/X fans that still exist can't stop the hope just because of shoddily written BuffyxXander ultra-sappy bullcrap! And you're free to email me or talk to me on AOL as Mitsuke224, AngelickJazzika, or Phoenixgurl2002 or MSN as angel_chibi_relena. Send lots of commentary, friend. By the way, if you want to say I am an ignorant twelve-year-old, don't. I'm sixteeen, and a B/S-shipper till the end! Dipshit!

Your writing stinks.

Mutant - some of your ideas are good, but you need to polish your skills. I highly recommend this site: writing/

Take a peek, I think you could learn a lot there.

I quit. Too many run-ons, not enough sense. The last straw was when you misused "there" at the end.

Jesus, I spent so much time attacking (and, actually, being the pompous, condecending prick too - that's projection for ya!) that I didn't review!

Anyway, The premis is fun. It's like 'Spiral', only with Xander. I wish I had more time to re-read this chapter (i'm in a kind of a rush, and used up way to much time for that attack _

Hmm...Well, now. As a Zen Master once told me "A Finger pointing to the moon, the finger is not the moon" (I love this phrase) basically, it means that the text guiding you to the greater truths are not the greater truths to begin with. Yes, I am horrible at spelling, and rely heavily on spellcheck. I admit my flaws, yet, you continue to be pomous and condecending, if not infested with hubris. However, this attack is a 'Strawman', what the hell do my gramatical impeperfections have to do with anything? this is just you dallying around the issue.

The same saying I used can also apply for fanfiction. Fanfics are RARELY well-written. It's more about the ideas behind them that intruige me.

Well, Danno, you do like selective memory now don't you? notice that there are TWO "Majin Gojira"s on and yes, I was booted once, for actually continuing one of these correspondence - I flipped when the author of a bad-fic changed around my unsigned reviews to make it seem that I liked it, i flipped, cussed in a signed review and, the rest is history. and I later re-started my account.

And even though you have a signed review, you do not put up your e-mail address. - but this is besided the point.

When you finally bring in evidence, that can actually support your claims, you do not site your source. Also, if Mutant is as bad as you say, why are there not more examples? maybe you can E-MAIL THEM TO ME.

And, Judjing by your closing comments...you're one of the few, low individuals that actually feed on the suffering of others. Your high and mighty attitude only serves to make you seem, well, evil. Ah, well, This will be my last response to you in this manner.

"I love America, Everyone's opinion matters! no mater how ignorant or uninformed they are!"

I'm really liking this, Michael. Can't wait for the finale. And don't delete the flames, it looks like you're getting a ton of reviews you so deserve anyway.

Whoo boy, Danno's back. Going to start forcing your opinion on everyone else again, eh, boy? And here i thought you had found another rock to crawl under.

Majin Gojira, you're a riot. Love how you criticize other people, yet you can't even spell simple words correctly. Here are the mistakes you made in your poorly written little rant:

critasismt

there arguments

excelent

truely

rediculed

I love how you say the other reviewers' "arguments" are flawed, proceed to debate them to some length and then conclude that they are actually opinions and one CANNOT argue an opinion, though that is precisely what you did, quite badly.

Also, it's interesting how you invite people to send you nasty e-mails, yet you don't leave your own address and aren't even a registered member of anymore. They must have booted you for breaking the rules, eh, pal? ROTFLMAO! You just lost any speck of credibility you MIGHT have had.

As for why people continue to read mutant's crappy writing, I can only speak for myself but it's like watching a train wreck: horrifyingly fascinating. Read this disastrous run-on sentence:

Donned in some thin sweats and a T-shirt only, a chill runs its way up her spine once more, making her shiver intensely as the cold chill seems to fill her entire being and she cuddles her arms together to try and counter it’s actions, the darkness seems to slightly lift allowing her a view of her surroundings, giving her a view of something not five feet away, five items that protrude from the ground.

Ye gods, what crap. Not only did the author manage to say the chill was wearing clothing, he crammed four sentences into one. Try to read it out loud and you'll probably run out of breath, if you don't die from laughter first.

Mutant is a lousy writer and it is my right and that of anyone else to say so if they want. I will continue to read his crappy stories because they greatly amuse me. Those who support this awful writer will not stop me from leaving these reviews. In fact, your words make me much MORE likely to leave them, because I hate censorship and I have every right to say when I don't like a story on this site. Thanks for the inspiration, MG.

Very Intruiging Story. Very unique Idea...I think I've only seen this done once before, but from a different angle. I like. In the future, describe the area a bit more - and have things in the scenery reflect aspects of Xander's Psyche.

As for the negative critasismt from Bertie and Cero...I think they are the same person, Don't you?

Now, I get to have some fun, and completely obliterate there arguments!

Let's begin:

"You still suck." Obviously, we are dealing with people with large vocabularies. One question: If he still sucks, why are you still reading it and not avoiding his work like the plague? "I agree with the other reviewer," Who I think is probably yourself, considering the similarities..."when ARE you going to get better? The reason I don't post an address is because I don't want to get harrassed with e-mail from you." You think THAT lowly of the human race? How sad. (Suddenly reminded of Yoda Quote)'Fear is the path to the Dark Side. Fear leads to Anger, Anger leads to Hate, Hate...leads to suffering. I sense much fear in you.'"Some of your ideas aren't bad but you put together so poorly it's painful to read." So, again, why are you reading it STILL? "Get a beta reader and maybe you could post something worthwhile. Right now you are just simply a bad writer. You need to work on getting better. Stone Cold thinks you're awful," For he is such an excelent literary critic. Pro-wrestlers are truely people we need to emulate :p (I know, probably a different person, but still, it's funny!) "Chris feedbacks everyone but you, and your good reviews only come from people who are so desperate to find a Xander story they will beg even a bad writer like you for more. Sorry but it's true." As opposed to the millions of slack jawed morons who beg for and post Spike-Centered stories? I don't see your point at all.

Your argument is flawed. It is not an argument, it is an opinion. One cannot argue opinions. Go away you. And, Yes, this is my actual author name. So, go ahead, send nasty letters. They will be rediculed and returned.

Hey, Mutant, you do know about the review-delete function, I believe this guy is a good candidate.

I am Evil, Here me roar!

:Meow:

wow, i have the greatest mathematical skills in the world. Haha, anyways, cheers for all your reviews anyways.

:)

You still suck. I agree with the other reviewer, when ARE you going to get better? The reason I don't post an address is because I don't want to get harrassed with e-mail from you. Some of your ideas aren't bad but you put together so poorly it's painful to read. Get a beta reader and maybe you could post something worthwhile. Right now you are just simply a bad writer. You need to work on getting better. Stone Cold thinks you're awful, Chris feedbacks everyone but you, and your good reviews only come from people who are so desperate to find a Xander story they will beg even a bad writer like you for more. Sorry but it's true.

depends... how long am i going to have to wait for you to grow a pair and post your E-mail address?

One word, maturity.

four words, look it up.

seven words, then come back in a few years.

Get the point? Or do i need to "spell" it out for you?

haha

Been seeing your writing for awhile now and you know. I keep waiting for your stories to improve. How long am I going to have to wait?