I’ve read this a bunch of times and it still makes me sad

I want more! Please!

Yes please do some form of prologue? How they tampered with said gun and then the tragic accident as well? That could make a good 2K words.

A friend of mine really likes Bronx Charlie, so I can't wait to tell her about this and see her response. :) Cool story btw

Ok.

That's really good - please write more!

There where literally tears in my eyes when I read this

PLEASE write more!

Oh my god! I love this. Please write more

It's brilliant.

A very dark one-shot, but also very refreshing from the usual silly deaths in the movie (except for Knuckles- his death was sad). But I have just one little piece of constructive criticism- you may want to fix the paragraph spacing in the middle. They've all gotten clumped together (through no fault of your own, I'm sure).

OH My god! You should write a story about how Bugsy copes with this, and he finds comfort in a very special blonde *Wiggles eyebrows*...
...
"What!"
Who are you talking about?
"Tallula! Duh!"

You should definately write more because there is a depressing small amount of bugsy malone fanfic lol and angsty fanfic ftw!

I was hoping you'd do a new story. I had an idea that unfortunately because of exams and things I don't have time to write (plus I'm doing a production of "Bugsy Malone" at the moment, and that makes me a bit of a busy bee). Is it possible you could do something with it? Message me if you are interested.

This was very touching and particularly nice in how you included each character's reaction.

C.

oooo interesting very good ! :D