Was good don't really like chad but the book was good try a little harder next time GODD JOB THOUGH

OH SHIT I JUST REALISED IT'S A HSM FANFIC

THIS CHANGES EVERYTHING

THIS MAKES IT EVEN SHITTIER

two sentences in. you lost me at two fucking sentences in.

"they learnt how to whack off together"

even if you wanted to make a gay porn story, you did it awfully wrong

I friggin love this, youre a fantastic writer! And very few grammar mistakes :)
i just favorited this btw :D

yupp jimmie def proved to the coaches (;