A very interesting start, well done, I would love to read more.

I enjoyed reading this, it's very sweet. I noticed a few tense shifts, but the writing is solid and there are some nice descriptions. It feels like set up for a longer story, though, and I'd love to read more.

the new blue review button beckoned me.

cute story. looking forward to seeing what happens next.

It seems like the start of something. A story of how they met here and there throughout their lives, culminating in them meeting again at the Academy for the Kobayashi Maru. or something like that...

I like it! More please.

I like it. Keep it going. You have a good foundation for an excellent story.