I really liked it! :)

Aw, cute! I liked seeing all the ME characters from the perspective of an outsider. And I LOLed at the part about Jack jumping into a krogan hockey ring. Is Karin named after our dear Dr. Chakwas?

You had a couple of grammar and formatting errors, and I think you could benefit from a beta reader to tighten up your prose, but it was a well-done story overall!

Oh, very nice. I loved the start- Garrus saying 'I'm not the one you have to worry about.' hehe.

I'm very interested in this! If you were to make a series out of this, it would SWEET!

not bad, good future, and all that, only just one mistake in the title and the fic it is Spectre not Spector, Spectre comes from the office of SPECial Tactics and REconnaissance, but not bad