I don’t understand, why does he want her to stay the ‘cripple’? Why does he want her to stay one notch below neji? And the fact that she didn’t ask, because he just said she can ask when the are alone, it upsets me. She’s going along with this yet she doesn’t trust him. Where did her hatred go? The way she just tossed it to the side doesn’t sit well with me. You didn’t even mention if she even watched the Naruto show in an AN...this is where the story ‘gets out of my liking’.

—Dog

At first this fic seemed kinda generic and meh, but I kept at it. Glad I did, things got a lot better and you improved a lot!

I really like your story, I hope to read again

I'm glad I found this story! It's super interesting, I love Hikai's relationships with her family and how complicated they are. I hope to see more if you ever return to this story!

Wooow so dramatic so cliche sooooo fucking boring
Dropped

But hiragana and its mirror katakana are phonetic like english. Its only when children are older do they study kanji which is similar to chinese.

No no please update. 3/6/18.

Hope Hikai becomes strong...and if she does learn Fuinjutsu. She could become a badass one like Minato and Kushina.
Maybe reinvent the Hiraishin.

More!

I hope she will remember that rage and use it to rebel and end the slavery, if she ever starts becoming fond of, or even respect Hiashi and teh Hokage in the future, I will in turn lose all respect for her.
Some things should not be forgiven.

watch at my hearts content - watch to my heart's content

mothers - mother's

uncles - uncle's
(for some reason you are not using the right apostrophe sign, the one you use create too large a space)

the earnest - the most earnest

teenagers bickering - teenagers' bickering

the younger the boy - the younger the child

perfect healthy - perfectly healthy

shelf-pity - self-pity

Up until today - To this day

elucubrations - introspection
(a weird word choice, basically anything would be better, I just gave one suggestion)

Im proud, of both - Im proud of you both

weigh of weakness - feeling of weakness

as genius - as a genius

poke in - poke into

paid attention - had paid the attention

doesn't breath - doesn't breathe

This story could definitely use some proofreading, I would strongly recommend you that get a beta reader or two to go over all the chapters.
Here's some examples of errors I noticed in this chapter alone:

For her credit - To her credit

cant - can't?

only we only would - we will only

Shelookedat - She looked at

"a good photographic memory"
It would be better to just write that she has a good memory, or a good visual memory, 'photographic' means by definition that her memory is perfect or close to it, so you can't add values such as good or bad to it.