I love it.

This was so cute! 3 I saw a few tiny spelling errors, but I was mostly so enveloped in the story that I didn't notice them! You write beautifully, and your attention to detail is striking! It was a really good visual, and it was cool to listen to Keira's thoughts! I'm a huge sucker for Mute Jak/Keira! :p It was overall such a sweet story and something that was believable enough to be canon! :D

For a short story, this was really good. Like, REALLY good. The characterizations are spot-on, the visuals are superb, grammar is great, and the atmosphere is just amazing... (sings Can you Feel the Love Tonight in the distance)

This is both plausible and memorable. Thank you for the story. :)

Very nice cute story :)

I'm not sure what I was expecting, but this wasn't it. This is better, even if it is a few years old now.

I particularly enjoyed the characterization of each character, especially Daxter and Keria. Also, I loved the vivid descriptions of the night sky and how you added sensory- it all fit the mood very well.
The whole theme itself is very cute and amusing. I suppose a work-acholic like Keira wouldn't really know how to let loose. Too bad it doesn't get any better in the future...

Anyway, I liked it! I'll be looking forward to more canon-centric pieces from you ( should you decide to write them )!

Great story, very sweet!

This is adorable, I love it! I am just tooi nebriated to really talk about all the sutt I like! LOOR AMAZING WORKS ALWAUS

Love it

This was freaking adorable Loor! I can't believe it, no OC's! That's so cool! I love it! I like seeing Keira through a more childish light. I never realized that she could feel left out when Jak and Daxter go out together and have fun. That never even occurred to me. :D