Hey whats up! Look this story is amazing and awesome and I was wondering, why havent you updated it?

me gusta la historia y como desarrollas a los personajes, se que las principales seran Kurernai y Mei pero tambien deberias por lo menos poner por lo menos a hinata (que se vuelva dark sino no la pongas, eso si que sesarrolle poco a poco su poder para ser creible y a tenten se veria genial en este harem solo ellas)

... so you kept canon... can you fuck off? what's the point of all this bullshit if you STILL going to write everything as canon?!. This is fanfiction yeah? why still have Naruto stand still and have people think that he froze when the demon brothers attack. That was REALLY stupid. IF I WANTED TO READ THAT I WOULD GO WATCH CANON faggot.

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I need the lemon for all chapter
and your story is quite good

The name of the story is kitsune of konoha by Birdmaster Blade

man, when does he get to show more him, fake!weak 222naruto is as boring or even worse then weak!stupid!naruto

AO3 is also a decent site, its actually my favorite after this one.

so wait he is just parsing off kyuubi's power? is the power he gifted permanent or just a loan?

You have writers block because you're making the story more complicated than it needs to be. Too many unnecessary drama, misunderstandings, and drawn out soap opera. 15 chapters and you've yet to establish a concrete harem and plot. And what happened to the "hate Konoha" plot?

"They were the most sinister eye's she'd ever seen" role credits'

L'idée peut être bonne mais je ne suis pas assez a l'aise mais plus en avance dans l'histoire plus Naruto cela est bien

Great job please continue it soon

I loved the story and I hope that you will update it soon!

I'm liking the story so far there's just a lot of flashbacks