AW . . . . my own heart just melted into a puddle sitting somewhere in my chest.

Wonderful story!

This was nice. A bit confusing, regarding the terms of the punishment, how long it had been and how Thor and Loki got on good terms again.

This was beautiful. As a fellow non-native speaker of English, I think you're doing extraordinarily well. The observations, the little details in the descriptions are beautiful. And the twist to the story, that it was Jane, not Sigyn that held the bowl over Loki as he was punished by the serpent was unexpected yet very intriguing. Because, what good is fanfiction if we cannot make our own little stories, that are not truth yet right in its own way? Well done!

I love it! :)

beautiful!

i had read this once, and I visit it one in a while , but i had forgotten the review. Sorry...

What to say to this little story?

It tears my heart apart that loki has been given such torture. How can a father give such pain to one he claims as his son, no matter how lost and misguided he can be? nothing justifies this...no matter the lesson tat has to be learnt...I love that thor stuck by his side, and that jane gave in to her compassion...I would have done the same...without a second thought.

I know what happened after this little story of course...but I wanted to say...great job...you have a fan here...

x

OH GOD. Why had I not read this little gem before? My dear friend, you are magnificent!
This is unique and wonderful; amazing work!

Loved it. Although I was a little bit confused for a few moments. You could've maybe said more things for context or background. And I would've loved to be able to read what went on in Jane's mind here. But. Loved this.

Very nice, short but said everything, good work!

WOWOWOW, this was soooo good! You have to know, I have a deep affection for Norse myths... Greek also but there is nothing above the Norse ones! And this one particular is one of my favorites... bringing that and Marvel's story together! Fantastic! You are my hero! I love it when people write such things! I thought the idea of letting Jane only dream it and whilst that actually doing it was very good! Kind of shows her connection to Loki, doesn't it? Well done!

Anna