I wish you'd continued this story...it's so intriguing and well-written. I'd love to see more!

Oh so good! Stories from Daphne's POV are always interesting because we saw so little of it on the show. I love how closely you wrote her reactions, beautifully capturing the awakening of her feelings for Niles - a heady brew of confusion, trepidation, curiosity, anticipation, yearning, and excitement. Really, really well done. I SO hope you continue with this story!

What a brilliant and intriguing start! I'm already caught up in this one, and can't wait for the next chapter. You're a wonderful writer :)

What a sweet and funny chapter! Daphne's awkwardness around Niles is so adorable, and everyone else was great, too. I'm so glad you're continuing this story. It's a bit sad to know that this story won't end in Niles and Daphne running into each others arms and declaring their love to each other, but then we know that it did happen eventually. :) I'm also curious about your other stories and hope you start them soon.

Great chapter! For a moment there I thought you had abandoned the story, lol. I really enjoyed the first chapter so this second was eagerly awaited. Anyway, love the awkwardness between those two, not to mention the instant attraction she's feeling for him. Just one minor comment, you should space the dialogue because sometimes it gets confusing. Other than that, fantastic chapter. Looking forward to your next.

Love this story, so glad you are continuing with it. Anyone that includes Martin gets points with me!

This is cute! It's a shame we never got to see this on the show. I'm sure it was an awkward evening for Daphne, in light of what she'd just learned. I like that you didn't really wrap things up here, since we all know what happened after this!

Awesome start! The story is very well written and everyone behaves very much in character, especially Daphne, of course. Her emotions and all the thoughts that pop up in her head are really comprehensible, even when she already starts to think differently about Niles (how she likes being close to him, etc).

I loved the "You don't like something sweet after your dinner?" confusion, lol. And the moment they have at the end (and how it's ruined by Frasier) is awesome.

The only thing you could change is having thoughts in italics instead of quotation marks, that was a bit confusing. But it's just a minor point and the story is perfect otherwise and I hope you do continue. :)

Excellent job on your first story and definitely a great take on one of my favorite episodes! I've always loved that scene where Niles comes over for the birthday party and have wanted to explore that a bit further. My only suggestion would be that when Daphne's having thoughts, to put them in italics instead of quotations. I was a bit confused as to which lines she was actually speaking out loud and what she was thinking. But I loved this and I hope you will continue to write more wonderful Niles and Daphne stories!

So exciting update soon

You are off to a great start here and are very good at capturing Daphne is this story. I really do hope you continue because you really do have something good going here. I loved the ending of this chapter especially.

Wonderful! I'm so pleased to see new Frasier stories and yours is simply a delight! Please continue.

I love this story its nice to see a perspective of what went on in her head after back talk. You left it open to continue I hope you do! Keep it up.