Reviews for Gold's Book of Pickup Lines As Tested by Gold
RedCharmeleon chapter 1 . 4/23/2017
Crys is a savage! This is pure gold! I laughed so hard lol
Winter Rubix chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
Ya' know, if it was me writing this it would be slightly different,
Like this pickup line:

Boy:did it hurt when you fell from heaven?
Girl:no, but I did scrap my knee climbing from hell!

That one is one of my favorite pickup line hahahaha (you should try it)

And

In the end, I would make Gold very VERY angry! That's for messing with him

Good fanfic, really funny
Homomatic chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
I died laughing. Good work. Gold, Sapphire, Blue, and Crystal were all hilarious in this.
Audrey chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Omg I can't stop laughing haha to funny
guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Love how you put Harley in there!
DaturaAngelTrumpet chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
This is awesome! Please do another thing similar to this!
Dragon2920 chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
Lol! Best. Story. Ever! You should totally do the bloopers and behind the scenes.
Shadow Flame 777 chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
BEST HUMOROUS FAN FIC EVER!
xX Shining Diamond Xx chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
I love it! I cracks up!
Taigablade chapter 1 . 6/7/2013
another one! i find this absolutely hilarious. i was laughing and snickering so much my family thinks i'm crazy XD. MORE! MORE!
ChibiDryad242 chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
X'D Holy Mother of Arceus, that was brilliant!
And... Harley... That scene... *dying*
Glaceon1362 chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
WINWINWINWINWINWIN
OH MY GOD I CANT BREATHE
YOU ARE JUST A BUNDLE OF WIN
Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
This is as funny as hell
LoveGlutton chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
I ve seen this somewhere before
TheOldRival chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
You should make a sequel using Behind The Scenes and Bloopers. YAY! I also have a new respect for Crys. ;)
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