| Reviews for Ring Around the Wrong Neck |
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   Esmereilda chapter 13 . 8/13 I like this version of the thief king over the Canon one |
| Esmereilda chapter 10 . 8/12 then dont introduce them to either charlie weasley or hargrid XXD |
| Esmereilda chapter 8 . 8/12 lol looks zork is gunna need a new puppet now XD |
| animerule64 chapter 19 . 7/10 Add more chapters please |
| foxymama31.1987 chapter 19 . 4/27 this is such a cute story is there going to be a sequel? |
| jcampbellohten chapter 17 . 1/26 Mad Max (lol) can only do what he does to Mai in canon because of the Millennium Rod, which he no longer has. |
| jcampbellohten chapter 16 . 1/26 Where did that come from?! The reason I'm only 90% blind-sided by this instead of completely is that you have "yaoi" in the description. There's no indication in the story that this would happen. |
| jcampbellohten chapter 14 . 1/26 I enjoyed the logic poking. I didn't know any of the ancient Egyptian trivia aside from the part about the headdresses, and the rest is stuff I hadn't thought of and that now that you mention it, it seems a blatant hole in logic. Also, I wish you didn't use italics so much. I didn't want to write that for a chapter where I had nothing to write about the content, but it's a problem I've had since Chapter 3 or 4, I think. |
| jcampbellohten chapter 3 . 1/25 Um, "teme"/"kisama", one of which is surely what Jonouchi said, don't actually mean bastard; they're just highly disrespectful ways to address someone. They get translated to bastard because English doesn't have different forms of "you" that vary in politeness like Japanese does. I'm also highly skeptical of Harry being able and allowed to live on his own and to not be tracked down by Dumbledore. |
| jcampbellohten chapter 1 . 1/25 Interesting. Hagrid uses a flying motorcycle to get from Godric's Hollow to Surrey. He wouldn't fit on the Knight Bus, and I would think he wouldn't take Harry on public transportation. |
| csheila chapter 4 . 10/18/2019 Great explanations on the games. Crossover new to me |
| csheila chapter 2 . 10/18/2019 Descriptions drove chapter. Great job |
| csheila chapter 1 . 10/18/2019 Great set up. I suppose it will be too much to keep Sirius from chasing after Peter. But everything else is great. Agree about Minerva but always felt Dumbles memory charmed her. |
| Angel Fantasy chapter 4 . 6/16/2019 Uh-Oh. If Harry got Yugi *coughYamislashAtemcough*'s Dark Magician, I know one High Priest who is going to be pissed at being in the wrong hands. I'd watch my back if I were you, boy! |
| annamccallen chapter 19 . 3/27/2019 This was amazing |
