| Reviews for Play Naive To Emotion |
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  stephanie chapter 2 . 5/30/2019 this was so good, I was trying to email you about another fanfic you wrote but the email is not good anymore. I would love to chat to see if you had finished it, it was on an old sailor moon site. |
 Egon-Starcollector chapter 10 . 12/1/2002 Oh...wow. *lets out the breath she didn't know she was holding* I'm never going to look at Spider-Man the same way ever again... |
| Emlizanne chapter 10 . 8/11/2002 Wonderful conclusion! Not just for Peter and MJ, but for any of the thousands of uncertain lovers around the world whom these poems could apply. There's a kind of universiality about the words and images you use which is quite remarkable, and very moving. Congratulations on what is probably the most readable and enjoyable collection of poetry I've come across in fan fiction. :) |
| DominoDS chapter 10 . 7/17/2002 very touching and very beautiful as always I love how you capture that Peter finally realizes what pain he caused her by his words the metaphors are just beautifully written out to go with their feelings and thoughts. |
| GSYH chapter 8 . 6/27/2002 One opinion matters only and to hell with all else... |
| GSYH chapter 7 . 6/27/2002 Confrontation, test; go farther or shatter... |
| GSYH chapter 6 . 6/27/2002 Some say true love exist only in theory. Many asked felt nothing before, many love only becaused asked. Condition to love because you are loved. Unless two people ask each other out at the same time, there is no way to ensure that he/she is only with you because you asked and they have nothing else to do. |
| GSYH chapter 5 . 6/27/2002 10 people in a group, 4 are sleeping, 3 are rocking, 2 are kissing, 1 is doing all the work... |
| GSYH chapter 4 . 6/27/2002 "Wherever you go, let me go too..." - Phantom of The Opera |
| GSYH chapter 3 . 6/27/2002 Somehow I don't think Mary Jane is the only girl following Peter with ropes...hehe! |
| GSYH chapter 2 . 6/27/2002 Peter, always the friend confided never the one confided about... |
| GSYH chapter 1 . 6/27/2002 Poor lonely MJ, beautiful. |
| dutchtulips chapter 9 . 6/16/2002 simply breathtaking. you write poetry better than I ever could. :) "Stuttering, Desperate" I think, was one of the best ones; I loved the way you worded everything and the way that Mary Jane is arguing back at him. you always manage to give MJ's rebuttal a great voice. commendable job once again, and kudos! hugsXX, ~dt. |
| anonymous chapter 9 . 6/15/2002 Wow! This is sooo amazing! I love the poem format and your words really jump out of the page! You are such a great writer! Keep up the good stuff! |
| Sgt. Psycho chapter 9 . 6/14/2002 A poet at heart, I assume, because you are very good at writing poetry! |
