It was nice! Good job!

Very good!

this:

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Oh, how enchanting this fanfic is! Aug 2013
You totally capture the purity and innocence of Rin x Lord Sesshomaru's bond, which I'm very sure creator Rumiko Takahashi thanks from the bottom of her heart. Sess x Rin are such kindred spirits that their love defies all explanation. They just are! Many fanfics prostitute them, only going for cheap erotica as Rin grows up

Eeee, it's so good, and u seem to get Sess so well! I really love their relationship! Great job!

it's not good it's fantastic!..it's like you've got what Sesshoumaru was thinking back then and I felt the feelings of a Lord Sesshoumaru..btw I love that scene where the monk nearly took Rin with him and Rin was struggling then Sesshoumaru has come to her aid..it tears me when Rin said that at the last scene, she really makes Sesshoumaru feel many emotions..gahh! I LOVE THIS!..

That's so like Sesshomaru... Loved it!

My friend, you have managed to describe my thoughts their relationship perfectly. Now, all it needs is a category...which will probably happen when pigs fly because I'm pretty sure that I'm not the only one that can't put it into a definitive category.

Bravo!

This is beautiful! I love it!

'Unless it concerned Rin'. Brilliant. I do believe in three sentences you have summed up the mystery that is Sesshomaru. Please write more stories in the future.

I liked that! *smiles*

*cries* IT WAS WRITTEN BEAUTIFULLY BETTER THAN I COULD EVER DO~~

My friend that was really good I enjoyed it :D