D'aawwwwwww. I can actually believe Garrus would try this canon-wise and the net result being quite similar.

He better not make her do the dishes! LOL

LOVED IT! I could so totally see Garrus setting the place on fire!

And thank you for all your help I have some wonderful ideas now!

Now if only my boyfriend would cook for me!

CSIDLE

Cute story. I'm not sure of the line separations you added (other than the transitional one when you changed to Shepard's POV). Also, quotations or italics (my personal preference) for the character's direct thoughts would be helpful-ie "Not bad, she thought"

I liked the humor of the story. Garrus's awkwardness in the situation shines through quite well. It did seem to cut itself a bit short. I would have liked to have seen a bit more of Shepard's thoughts about the situation and her overall feelings for Garrus, but overall, it was a good story.

BAHAHAHAHA. That was adorable. Poor Garrus XD

Ow,ow,ow. OMG, I haven't laughed that hard in a long time.

Reminds me of the first meal my husband cooked for me.

The first part of this was very romantic and put a smile on my face :3 Garrus is so cute and awkward! My only issue was that Shep was very... distant I guess. I dunno, it was like once you got to the end you lost your gumption. Otherwise, this fic was adorable!

Loved it. The image of Garrus trying to cook a meal is fantastic

Can't stop smiling. I've always found Garrus's awkwardness cute and this just melted me inside. Lovely 3

Jane x

Very cute story. Shepard is brave woman ;-)

Very cute story. Shepard is brave woman ;-)