Erin sounds like an ignorant ass.

I love the details! I hope that they renew Ringer for season 2, even though it has been a while. I am not giving up hope.

I've read all the stories I could find on ringer, but for some reason I missed yours. This was my favorite show and I was devistated when it was canceled. Thank you for writing a story and actually finished it. I loved it so much and I read in two days. Great job. maybe now you can write another one and make it completely different.

Great job on this fic! I really liked the way that you wrapped up all the story-lines/cliffhangers that the show left fans with at the end of the finale.

Lovely job.

I loved that you introduced us to Malcolm sister, thank you :)

Hi, just wanted to make a few comments about the money side of things. A number of times you've implied they're dirt poor. But, also that they have 40 million. This confuses me loads :/ the house I'm just about to buy costs more than theirs in wales and I'm only on £40k a year. For the average person, 40 million is enough to live on, in the lap of luxury and leave a nice nest egg for all their kids.

P.s sorry I'm joining you so late in the day, it's taken me a while to find the ringer :) great second season x

Dunno abt the fin, but I was really liked the beginning of story. Well done :D and the way you describe London its so funny, I appreciate your work, very! :)))

Just reviewed to tell you I'm loving this story so far! I absolutely miss Ringer and can't believe we never got to see the results of the fallout between Siobhan and Bridget, and more importantly (for my fragile romantic heart) Bridget and Andrew. I also love that you're taking time so far to really flesh out the story and the characters; it's so much more satisfying because of that non-conclusion we received :(

Thank you for staying with this to the end - Great story!

it's very cool

I like the section with Juliet, Andrea and London after the wedding. It seems very human. Your strength is in young adult relationships.

One of the fun points in doing a FanFic is to see other people's vision of exactly the same point with exactly the same people in exactly the same city. The difficult part is trying to do an impartial review of this other vision of the same point because obviously you so firmly have your own ideas in your mind. It's even harder when your last scene was doing the same events. For that reason I will hold on what I see as issues.

Oh good! Finally we're getting him swept off stage. I'm really glad you didn't pull any Perry Mason last minute twists. Now we have to see what he can try to do.

You also left a logical hook to further progression at the end.

There was a strongly "written by a woman" tone to it. For example, your describing in such detail the eye color of the nameless person who read the verdict. The eye color is a meaningless detail. "She had a nervous look about her, as though she regretted getting up in front of the courtroom" seems more telling to me than her hair length and eye color. It certainly gives more of her personality.

In all arguments, prosecution goes first followed by defense. Opening statement, presentation of the evidence and testimonies and closing summary.

Structurally, the scene is generally sound. The flow is right, etc. You've also got Henry well set up for a guilty verdict, unless the defense can pull out something very strong in the way of hard evidence.

If my daughter had a babysitter I didn't know take over for her without even telling me I'd be furious. I gave HER orders to do it. That babysitter is an unknown. This isn't like painting a fence or some replaceable property thing. We're talking two very vulnerable human lives, one with a serious medical condition, being handed over to a complete stranger. It's not like she even stayed there to be available to supervise and sent the babysitter to the master bedroom with the twins. She LEFT the house, with them in the care of a complete stranger who was the lowest bidder.

I'd be a bit surprised that a trial like this would rank being broadcast on TV. Only one death, nobody famous, etc. But I don't watch enough TV to know.

I really like the blood spatter evidence work. You've done homework there. It shows. It shows also in confidence in the prose. I'm glad to see you moving out of the domestic scene and into other areas.

I'm not sold on Bridget lying in the next part. There seems to be far less risk in telling the truth.