more?

Interesting... thus far :D

Finally together

Hmm, it's illogical that the guards obey the prince instead of the king. And also IMO Isshin is not to be blamed. He did what was best for his wive at that moment.

lol I wants more! I wanna see wat happens!

Nice story but, I don't understand: why the witch told Shiro that he and Ichi were her children, and later Shiro tells everyone the truth?
Ie, what exactly Shiro believes is the truth of their birth?
Rangiku told him the truth, making it pass like a lie to implement her plan? And if so, why Shiro does not understand that there is something wrong in the story that Rangiku told him?
I'm so confuse _
Please update soon, because I need to figure out what is happening DX !
Forgive my english ç_ç

can't wait for the new chapter

Id be scared to Ichi! Not math!

I am so happy you started this up again I've been waiting! Can't wait to see how Shiro is!

this story sounds interesting you should up date it (:

please wright more! i wanna know what happen next!

I love this story even though I'm scared to see how things will be in the next 18 yrs. I wonder why the witch want a son for herself.

Isshin did a jerkish thing XP

filler indeed XD

This seems interesting. I like it how you narrate it in fairy tale like. I wonder whom will be taken by the witch. The cliche will be Shiro since he's the wilder one. But I think it'll be more interesting if Ichigo is the one taken by the witch. I can't wait to read the next chapter XD