Btw it is regain composure (sorry i dont no why but this one (of a view) particular error() bugs me! Somehow! -sorry there is seposed to be an s between the () but it wont do it,just like comas that are suposed to be between the won/don and the Ts...sign-

Wow!~

I like them all but mostly dragon tamer curse breaker and alchemist.

Love the story and I think you should make harry a curse breaker in your next story even though I'm a bit late.

Interesting, however you need to work a bit on your grammar/spelling. Other then that you have a great story in the works.

interting twist

update soon

CurseBreaker I like this story

Killing a student so soon in the story was a very bad idea. It was his first class for pete's sake Anyway, Harry is beyond naive as he keeps ignoring all the signs.

I really liked the hats reaction to Harry. I'm really happy that Harry and Hermione are in Ravenclaw in this story.

Alchemist, Transfigurer, CurseBreaker, CharmCaster and DragonTamer. I like the ideas for all of these, but this is the order I like them in. I really hope you write all of these stories.

I'll offer to beta read and proofread. I've never done it before, but I DO have a very thorough understanding of English and English grammar. Let me at your chapters, and I'll fix them up!

I really like the idea behind this story. From a story standpoint, I like what you have written so far. That being said, you really, really, really need a beta reader to proof read your stories and help fix the typos. Sometimes it is difficult to decipher what exactly you are trying to say.

As an example, you wrote;

"Ollivander smile lovely.

He was making a new wand. He closes his eyes and begins to hear the familiar song from a girl long, long ago. He opens his eyes again felt magic move his hand. He picks up a simply carving knife."

This could be changed to;

"Ollivander smiled lovingly.

He was making a new wand. He closed his eyes and began to hear the familiar song from a girl he knew, long long ago. He opened his eyes again having felt magic move his hand. He picked up a simply carving knife."

That being said, as I said, it is a good story so far, and I do hope to see more of it from you.

Just wanted to say I like your story. As far as the ideas you came up with last chapter I like the one about being an apprentice to bill weasley the best

Just wanted to say I like your story. As far as the ideas you came up with last chapter I like the one about being an apprentice to bill weasley the best

I like where you are taking this storry