Hey Dragonicdevil it's me Nomad88 coming in with the final review for the final chapter. All's well that ends well I guess LOL! Danny and Dani defeated the Bloodscream and Vlad and took care of the other half ghost. Very nice ending. Although maybe Danny should have kept one of the new powers just case he runs into something in the future. Assuming there is a future/sequel. Anyway this was a good story with a few twists and turns but good twist and turns though. I would've like to have seen a scene at the end though with Danny, Dani together with their family having a celebration or something and maybe something at the end with Vlad or Bloodscream vowing vengeance but I do like the way you ended it.
Keep up the great work with your writing and congrats on finishing this story.

Nomad88.

Hey Dragonicdevil,

Nice chapter, the fight scene was great, Danny showcasing his new power set. I like that you're making Danny Phantom more along the lines of the fantastic four where it's kinda like a family thing, saving and protecting the world from threats only in this world the threats are ghost...A ghost busting family. A minor detail though, I think that you should've expanded more on what Danny was experiencing in his mind. I think you should have made the fight between him and his darker self longer and gave the darker self the dark Dan personality...I feel that could've upped the stakes a bit because not only will he have to face Vlad and Blood Scream next chapter but he also has to keep that dark part of him in check while he does it, but again that's just me. Keep moving forward with your story.

NOmad88.

Hey Dragonicdevil.

I know I'm a bit late with this review but I'm here now, cool chapter and I'm very intrigued by this new power that Danny has acquired. I wonder what you're going to call this new power ecto-splosion or ecto-bomb LOL! As you can see I'm sorta bad with names so I'm curious to see what you came up with. Other than that I'm eager to see Vlad in action...although I think you should have dedicated a chapter just to him before he meets Blood-Scream, just to show his mind set and reasoning for joining forces but you'll probably cover that in the next chap...anyway keep moving forward with your story.

NOmad88.

Hey Dragonicdevil, this is Nomad88.

As promised I'm back to review your story. So far so good you've managed create a compelling story here, one that's filled with dire challenges for our hero to face. I'm digging Blood Scream as the main villain of the story and I'm eager to see the showdown between him and Danny and Dani. Also very awesome Idea on upgrading Danny's power set and I'm curious to see what other new powers emerge despite the fact that they are a double edged sword...too bad because something tells me he's going to need all the help he can get against Blood Scream especially if he keeps creating more half-ghost and for when Vlad returns. Nice fight scenes and I also like the family togetherness in each chapter. Danny and his family facing these challenges as they come just like a family should. So far you have a good story so keep up the great work.

Nomad88.

The story is very good and has no major grammaticale errrors but when I read it it feels like a bumby ride. It's good, but bumpy. See if you can find a grammer checker on line or something.

CONTINUE!

Dun Dun Dun!

Blood Scream and The Terror Twins, awesome names. It'll be interesting and cool to see how Danny and Dani handle these new developments.

Nomad88.

Hey Dragonicdevil it's me Nomad88. This was a great chapter, and it's nice to see that caring relationship between Danny and Dani and I hope you continue that as the chapters progress. This chapter had some good action scenes and something tells me that with a half-ghost George Rogers out there the action will only intensify. Keep up the great work and thanks for all of your support on TSA: The Amazing Spider-Man.

Nomad88.

Cool! Love this story so far! Update SOON! :)