And I Particularly like how long it is because it tells us it’ll be a great story

I think it’s the best lemon I’ve read period but I agree that sometimes it’s a little confusing how they’ll change positions suddenly but other than that it’s literally one of the best things I’ve read but what’s your tinder so I can keep reading the rest!?

I loved it personally. It’s tender and tense and in my opinion pretty fucking good

M8, this was FANTASTIC. If you're still out there, please continue this

I've read a lot of lemons, but this has to be the hottest! Good job ! The only thing is that at times it was confusing, like, Naruto is on top? Or he pinned her on the back? The anatomy wasn't described all that well, but still, that was super duper HOT.

Mdkkdkskdkckekkwkcod where's da remake and what's your tumblr? Plz, I needZ more

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There is no fucking way this is your first lemon. It's so good!

dam man you made this too literal

Great

What is the continuation called?

Heeheehee

Nice!

Awesome!

More!

Sequel, please!

Damn! I'm never a fan of lemon or oranges but this is good!

One of my favorite all time lemons. Still hard to believe it was your first one. I'm still waiting for part 2!

I thought it was fucking amazing...long but amazing i loved it and anyone elsr who doesnt love it...well they dont know beautifully crafted material and frankly this was so good if you made a book i would buy it you could call it fifty-shades-of-hinata