Still waiting

This is... messed up. Did you even read the manga or the Novels? because if you did you should already know that this is disrespectful to the characters and their relationship.

Nezumi always struck as a rapist to you? WTF?! He is NOT!

I agree that Nezumi is an asshole, but he has never molesting Shion in all the time they were together. A litter flirty? yes. Too close to Shions personal space? Sometimes... But none of those equals to being a rapist!

Shion was off too, but not as much as Nezumi i could have been capable to look through that but not to what you make with all his situation.

It looks like you just see what you wanted to see.

And because it isn't actually that, you make it happen in this fanfiction. You just use the formula of any of those poorly written Yaoi stories where rape is presented as a good, romantic and erotic thing to do to a person and its justified with an "He find him cute" and "it sounds like you like it too".

This is one of my favorite Pairing in all anime for its complexity and well written characters with interesting backstories and opposite personalities that make a good chemistry, while also they were dealing with tough live danger situations that force then to reveal their real nature and discover what make them happy along the way, which of course was being with each other.

Shame you didn't keep it as such...

You just say it, what i just read was Sh¡t!

And i can't understand how somebody could enjoy reading it.

nice chapter. I found this in my favorites list and decided to reread it. Definitely reloving it so far. Great interactions with them!

sucks

I hope tomorrow comes soon (hopes that the update comes soon). I'll give cookies? Thanks for the story and everything!

I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOO MUCH THANK YOU YOU WONDERFULL HUMAN BEING IF I COULD I WOULD GIVE YOU A HUG BUT HERE'S A AIR HUG.

KNIVES AND SCREAMS
GEE

...Update? UPDATE?! :O
Please PLEASE 3 3

Ok, so... this is my first time typing a review for anything really, so forgive me if it is a bit awkward. Honestly, I only found this fanfic by chance. I was really only looking for fanfics that were completed. I found another one called Teddy Bear, which I honestly haven't actually read yet. As soon as I saw this one being recommended I went to check it out right away, but I didn't realize that it wasn't completed, yet. I started reading it around maybe 11 pm or so on Wednesday night and ended up staying up until around 1 or 2 am the next morning. Which was actually surprising since I had actually already been awake since 12 pm on Tuesday. But anyways, the only reason I finally ended up going to sleep that night was because the tablet I had been reading it on died and I had no way to charge it at the time. And then on Thursday night, I started reading it again. I ended up getting to chapter 22 that night, only staying up until 1 am that time. Finally on Friday night I ended up getting to this last chapter here. Of course, I still hadn't realized it wasn't a completed fanfic and was totally confused. So, as a result I ended up going to sleep much earlier than the past two nights, unable to review at the time since I was actually at my great grandma's house for Thanksgiving. I am now home and on computer at 5:53 am on a Sunday, typing the review I really wanted to type on Friday. I honestly can't wait for the next chapter. Since I can empathize with pretty much any character I read about, my emotions were all over the place while reading this. I hope you can get the next chapter out soon. And now I should go read the other fanfic that led me to this one and then head to bed for some much needed sleep.

Where is part two? Update soon!

I... this whole thing

I just

LET ME LOVE YOU YOU'RE PERFECT AND THIS WHOLE THING IS BEAUTIFUL IN EVERY WAY~ I love all the emotion in this, you will be a great author someday - actually screw this you're already a great author and you'll be successful and sell amazing novels and become super-rich and we will all worship the ground you walk on~ YOU are wonderful and also I'm looking forward to the next chapter ;D

I can't believe you updated this fanfiction! I'm so glad!
Thank you, this was my first fanfiction in this fandom and I love it still so much.
Allthough I will have to start reading from the beginning...

So great to have you back :D I hope everything is better or doing better. This update made my dayThank you for posting

Yay! Can't wait for the next update! :)

Getting mega super fantastic good can't wait for more

Hi Maplesnowchunks, I like your story and I hope you can get back to this soon w I wish I could hug you for all of the hard work, but I'm only reviewing o v o;;;