Wow. This story was so incredible I am quite lost for words. When I first started reading I really didn't expect this kind of ending! You managed to break my heart and yet you madd me so unbelievably happy. (I know how cheesy that sounds, but I'm just being honest) this was a masterpiece. I have been staying up all night for the last few days just to read more of this wonderful story. I don't know what I will do with myself tonight without having it to read! (Maybe I'll just go back to the beginning and restart it! Haha) thank you so much for taking all that time to write this incredible story. The epilogue was not what I was expecting at all and it was unbelievably sad to read how much Jareth suffered while he was without Sarah. I had to keep taking breaks, reminding myself it was just a story and that I was crying for no reason, but really this is more to me than just a story. Thank you, thank you, thank you! Please consider returning to this story one day - I would so love to read about Jareth's life with Sarah and their little baby

Thanks again, and please, never stop writing! *hugs*

Jestem zaciekawiona tym ujęciem, tu mnie masz, będę wypatrywać cytryn

Oh man, I forgot how heavy this one was. That journal at the end breaks my heart. It's such a good story.

I loved this book. There are somethings that don't sit right with me (bdsm isn't my thing) but the story is great. It's really good. I just wish we got Jereth's reaction in the I think you captured Jereth. Not so much Sarah at times but still I loved most of this.

I really enjoyed that. It was darker than my usual reading. But it was really enjoyable and that last chapter had me on the edge of my seat. So many revelations for an epilogue.

I'm loving this so much. So slack on reviews but I just can't read it fast enough.

I dunno. Claiming consent is none of his business is pretty Dark! Jareth to me.

I'm enjoying this. Well written and I loathe Severin.

Przeczytałam do końca, na początku miałam mocno mieszane uczucia, wizja Sary jako złamanej i zniewolonej była dla mnie nie do przyjęcia, podobnie jak wątki sado-maso, wiem, jestem staroświecka i wszędzie szukam romantyzmu, dałam jednak szansę tej opowieści i przeczytałam ją do końca. Ostatnie rozdziały były dla mnie nagrodą, zobaczyłam powrót do równowagi i zdrowych relacji , bardzo spodobała mi się wewnętrzna przemiana Jaretha, jego głęboki rozwój osobisty, warto było poznać tą skomplikowaną historię miłosną.

Stolen is the past participle of the verb to steal. Stollen is a rich Christmas fruitcake. You are subliterate.

What the ever loving hell?! I really hope Sarah’s under an enchantment of some sort, because in only 3 months she actually LIKES being Jareth’s slave? Being sold like a head of cattle really doesn’t bother her, she’s grateful? I want to smack her back to reality and make her see she’s not that weak.
On a related note, your writing itself is well done. Though I don’t like this version of Sarah, kudos for evoking a strong emotion reaction.

You are an exceptionally gifted writer. Thank you so much for your dedication in the completion of this work.

My favorite parts of your writing: The relationships you create. LOOOOOVE your Sarah/Jareth interpretation. Cannot get enough. Like, please give me more. It's all I want in life. The drawback for me: I thought you could do without a lot of explanations that are included. This does not detract at all from the parts that I luuuurved. Allow me to repeat. I love it. Thank you.

LOOK WHAT YOU DID

AS SOON AS SARA STARTED SKIPPING DOWN THAT DAMN HALLWAY, I KNEW SHE WAS TOAST.

Sarah had such a perfect opportunity to respond to "curiosity killed the cat" with "but satisfaction brought it back"