real wishes:

Cute, I like the full-circle feel of Cat trying to be tough for Jade to Jade trying to soften for Cat. I like that both of them count her apologies. There's just a lot of good in this story, short and sweet. :)

btw, you should change this from 'Incomplete' to 'Complete' so more people will read it, since some people (myself included) don't usually read unfinished stories.

Good Story

I loved it! I thought it was sweet and tender in all the right places, & you could tell that Jade loves Cat but there's still some kind of angstyness? I guess haha. Idk! But good job!