That was beautiful! I love this story, and even if I am not a big Taylor Swift fan, even I could see that you matched the lyrics perfectly to your plot and writing. Keep writing!

*dies of fluffyness*

I was listing to this song and this story popped into my mind and so i was reading it while listing to the song and i kept going back to the just such an a adorable song and i loved the story as much as the was perfect,it fit to the video and was so sweet!GREAT STORY!

Word of advice for one shots with songs don't mix the lyrics into the plot and create your own idea

You have to update mirre like ASAP! But I do say there is alot of repeation nit to be mean or sound rude but I dont like it in third person id rather have it written in their perspective but ither than that its awesome :D

AAAAAAAHHHHH I LOVE THAT SONG AND VIDEO AND UR STORY TOO