The story itself was good. I really liked it. But the editing was awful. There were way too many places where the he/she his/hers pronouns were reversed. There were also a couple paragraphs where you said the same thing twice, like you couldn't decide which sentence was better so you kept both.

You should credit Grosse Pointe Blank in an author's note unless you want to be cited for plagiarism.

Such a wonderful fic. I love that he never forgot about Rachel and that he was completely okay with giving up his lifestyle just to be with her.

The action scenes were really well written. The pacing was really good and kept me on my toes.

The one thing I would've liked I see is more of Rachel's reaction to Noah being an assassin. I think that she would've had more of a problem with his job (I like I think that thy discussed it at length when he came to NY$)

Overall, beautiful fanfic. I hope you continue writing