Beautifullllll! Absolutley.
- LtM

Incredible story! I enjoyed it!

That was deep.

That was incredibly deep. I was not expecting that from such a short piece, but that was reeeally well done.

I love the way this is written. The second person point of view is very difficult to write in. And it really draws the reader in and makes them a part of the story.
The use of metaphor was great, the water and the bouy scene. It was a insightful and intersting story. Good job.