It's been almost 2 years since you updated and I'm hoping you come back and finish this story. I really like it so far! 3

This is great so far, please update and I'll keep reviewing ;) faved

Omg
Axel that was a dirty pick up lineXD
Anyways i liked it please update soon...
I'm this pairing like glue.
I actually luke how roxass father was starting to change[ i know that what I'm talking about was still in chapter 1]

And dont worry I'm not really a huge fan of Axel. XD

This is amazing so far! :)

Interesting story! Can't wait to read more :). I thought it was funny having Axel act like a creep and pervet XD

Truly
innocent

Yep, Axel's is such a jerk in this. He's not one for being subtle is he?

Anyway, I thought this chapter was really good and I liked the friendship blossoming between sora and roxas as they play sports. Good job! Update soon!

oh god i can totaly see axel doing that to poor roxas!..haha he has that perv vibe to him XD...cant wait till the next chapter :D

This is really good I'd like to read more

I think the interaction between the both of them was nice, it didn't feel forced or boring it felt natural considering these two had just met and Sora was trying to bridge the gap with some type of conversation in order to form a bond.

Seeing Roxas with Namine was great to and Kairi was her lovely usual peppy self without being annoying. Its great I'm enjoying it so far, update when you can.

I've got a big spark of interest in this! The opening is very easy to follow and I can sense and see all of Roxas' emotions and easily slip into his past. My poor little Roxas I wish I can take all the pain away from you!

Great opener, off to read chapter 2.

This is great, would love to know how Sora and Roxas get on keep up the awesome work and can't wait for the next chapter :D

Interesting set up. I'm honestly surprised that roxas's father got away with what he did...

I wonder what he did to make namine forgive him.

The diologue between sora and roxas was fine, I just think roxas went through a little mood change or something. He went from not caring to being happy pretty fast. I guess no one can help it when it comes to sora's attitude.

Anyway, this looks pretty good so far. I congratulate you for writing in first person. Its not an easy thing to do...

i hate roxas' dad! poor ventus is in jail T.T...but so far i LOVE the story line and i cant wait for more :D

Y'know? I was just goofing around at fanfic... And i found this! This is seriously great! I love it! I wanna c what happens next! I cant wait for the update! ( laxaedus is going to be the gym teacher right?) XD i also love all the detail you put on the scenery and the characters! Please update soon! And thank u by the way! U just made my day :)

LOVE. WRITE MORE, NOW! I usually don't like reading fanfics from Roxas's POV, because I find most people don't portray him as I imagine him to be like. BUT YOU DO, well almost.

Anyway, KEEP WRITING. :D