i may or may not have shed a tear.

This was sad but beautiful! It would be awesome if you could do it in Eds POV. I just can't help but wonder what's going on in his head

This was amazing, yet sad. I cried, and it was beautifully written. Great job.

I liked it. And writing from Roy's POV was definitely a nice twist. I was actually worried you had killed Ed in the beginning, but your superb writing made me continue because I just had to know what drove him.
Excellent job!

Oh my god, your writing is so beautiful and so are your stories. I said, "awwww" probably more than 50 times already. This story is so sweet. Your writing is awesome.

I really liked this. I love how its from Roy's POV but it made me sad at the begining because i actually thought someone was already dead. LOL i was almost crying before i got even half way. Grammer needs a little fixing but otherwise...it was a fantastic story

I really think it was a wise decision to tell this story from Roy's point of view. So many times the story of cutting and/or self injury is told in the cutter's/Self injurer's point of view. Not often enough is it told from the point of view of the loved ones. I think the reason this moved me as much as it did is because even though you flawed Roy, it made him seem really real and true. And yet at the same time you empasized the concept of true love. So I have to commend you for that. This story really stirred up emotions for me. Great Job!

I sob silently in my office while I read this. You put every little details of Roy's feeling. Unfortunatelly I got the same problem and I'm in Roy's position. You know, every thought Roy had was mine too. Please make more, I'm gladly devour it.

This was very good. The grammar wasn't the best, but I could understand what you were trying to say.

I could also really relate to this story. A long time ago, I was in the place that Edward was in. I'm super impressed, because Roy's reactions and Ed's lies were completely accurate in portraying the disease of addiction, and the illness of depression. Very good!

Pretty good. A few mix ups on words but it's quite good, especially considering English isn't your first language. The story itself was really good too. Well done. :)