You created a dyad well before the Rise of Skywalker even existed. Makes you wonder ;)

I slept late nights just to finish reading this fanfiction. It easily means it was FANTASTIC.

Thanks for another enjoyable chapter

Another fantastic chapter

Another excellent chapter

Another excellent chapter, though personally, I think the Jedi order has its own problems, especially due to the fact that they started paying attention to politics more than they should have. Personally I think balance in the force is understanding the force in its entire day, both dark and light. There is a reason that the yang Yang symbol represents balance. But that’s just my cup of tea, however your story works out in the end, I really look forward to it. Thanks for all the work you’ve put into it. And his mom is doing a great job and instilling some great values in her son.

Thanks for the chapter

Another great chapter

Great chapter, thanks

You're in Uni and can't figure out that you've never once used THAN correctly? You flunked out since this was written, haven't you?

If you’re interested I would love some stories of Shmi’s wedding and pregnancy.

I have really enjoyed this story and there is plenty of room for sequels. However I feel that now, six years on, if you looked back you will be horrified at some of the errors.
As a product of the British education system pre Comprehensive Schools I have had to restrain my inner grammar nazi on many occasions. At the very least get yourself a good dictionary and Roget's Thesaurus and many of the errors will just go away. Looking forward to the rest of this series and wishing you good luck with future endeavours.

In chapter one when you first used relieve when it should have been relive I figured it to be a typo/autocorrect issue, now it's just bringing out my inner grammar nazi. Please have a care with getting the right word, and the right phrasing, now I think about it. I really hate having to critique someone else’s writing style, so sorry, hope you're not too offended. I only really do this when I’m really enjoying the story. Can't wait to finish this one and read the rest of the stories.

Why is there a co-pilot's chair in a room of the lake retreat? (Last section) I get the impression this scene was originally plotted to be aboard a senatorial yacht or similar.

Query: Right at the start of the chapter - eighteen months into his Jedi training; nearly ten at the start and just turned twelve at the end... How did Anakin get to have three birthdays in eighteen months?