Beautifully written at an excellent pace
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Oh my...favorite story for sure!

Wow. I'm speechless.

Probably my favorite Sherlolly one shot on here!

Well, I am glad you used the titanic reference. Made me giggle. Nice story!

That was a great story, very exciting to read and highly enjoyable. Thumbs up!

Wow. Just wow...

Wonderful!
The way you wrote Sherlock was perfect - it was totally believable behaviour for his character and how he may act in this situation.
I love this! 3

Wow, this was really nicely done. Loved it!

I hate it ...I wish people would stop making him look like all he wants is sex!

She placed the kiss like a question, letting it mold gently to his mouth until the contours fit perfectly. Then, when it felt right, she pressed her lips against his with more insistence, seeking an answer.

For about two seconds he was unresponsive; stuck in his head, observing the sensation. Then something clicked, and he offered his reply with a level of assurance which surprised them both in equal measure.

LOVED those two little paragraphs. Lovely job all around.

Brilliant. BRILL-YANT. And this was NOT a sex scene. This was a LOVE scene. The sex is...okay not incidental but it all reeks of such exquisite affection and all in Sherlock's correct voice. * tips hat * and you deftly balance the awkwardness and just make everything seem so genuine and real and clumsy and magical all at once. ...Can I write like you when I grow up? I don't think I could have pulled this off * pouts, then accepts fate with sheepish resignation * Well done, brava!

This is the most beautiful sex - no, LOVE scene; I have to call it a LOVE scene! The most beautiful love scene I have ever read! So wonderfully and sweetly written. And funny. And boiling hot at the same time!
And Molly and Sherlock are so perfectly in character(yes, he'd so view sex as another experiment and get excited by the prospect of it working, because... it's him, he CAN'T fail! P)! Great story! :D

So, I just reread this again and saw that I never told you how awesome this story is. Because it is. Perfect and sexy and adorable and just wonderful. DAAAAAMN.

Ah! I love it! I am writing my own Sherlolly fic and I am writing a lime. Which is what I call sexy times with no sex but I can't seem to do it right. It's not sexy enough. Any tips. My email address is if you have a chance to give me tips. Thanks.