I cant believe I read it allá in one go and I got here without my happy ending! Please, write more! I'm actually crying!

Btw, I've love it so far, I can feel all the emotions and I want more!

I want them to have a happy ending. A child and love

Please keep them coming !

Gosto da sua história e na minha sincera opinião, acho que você deveria continuar pois essa história tem um grande potencial além disso, trata sobre um assunto que acontece com frequência na vida real, e também acho que essa história pode ser uma luz no fim do túnel para quem passa pela mesma situação.

Eu gostei bastante da sua história e se você fica feliz em escrever essa história eu acho que você deveria continuar.

(Nick no World of Tanks rafael589)

you dirty little... WHY DIDNT U FINISH IT I LITERALLY READ THE ENTIRE THING IN A DAY AND U MADE ME DEPRESSED BECAUSE I WAS HOPING FOR A 20TH CHAPTER BUT NO

Please update ...
Story is going on quite nice ...

I think it should be a happy ending, if it’s the last chapter I would like to see them together.
I honestly really enjoyed how you put the story together, with the struggles but loving each other regardless.
I think for the end chapter she comes back and says I’m not worth it, because she believes she just deserves pain with no happiness in her life. And Naruto being Naruto, says for as long as I remember my dream was to become Hokage... she looks down and before the tear start to pour he reaches out pulls her in close, she looks into his eyes and he say’s but I see that without you in my life. Maybe starts to tear up, without you I could never be the hokage I want to be!
I don’t know, but I think that they should be happy in the end, not find out someone cheated because I think from what I read they love each other very deeply and they just need to figure it out. Maybe Naruto cry’s for his lost child. Then they make up and live happy ever after.
So ya again I enjoy what the story great work!

If it’s the last chapter please give a happy ending but maybe some drama were she’s like I’m not worth it and what Naruto does best. Gets her to snap out of it saying hey I have a dream to become hokage, and She would look down, then he would pull her close, puts his hand beside her face and says but I see now becoming hokage would be meaningless unless your their with me.
I honestly really like how you put together the story, it amazing, I think it personally would love them to be happy in the end, and from what I read they wouldn’t cheat on one another because they are so in love, they don’t even know what to do. But please finish the story. And ya have a great day!

You should keep on writing from all what I read I love it.

I would LOVE more!

Finish it

can u continue it its intresting

Please continue

Well i kinda liked the beginning because Naruto's life was easier. But once Shion lost the baby his life was like shit and it became a living hell. I would want you to fix that.

P.s. I could give you a helping hand in your vocabulary.

Continuation? :/