How have I not read this? IDEK...but good, haha.

I really loved your story! I thought the characters were quite IC and the whole thing was lovely :)

I'd like to read more for sure!

I like it :)

Hey :D

I read your OS a few times ago but with the exams, it's hard to find a time for reviewing all stories I already read. Especially when you can't concentrate on anything else than the lessons you have to learn. :P

Well, it was a entertaining fanfiction; I wish the events would happen that way, as I found that August/Pinocchio acts not much in the end of season 1. And I always think that he'll be good for Emma, even if it's kind of weird that he knew her as a baby. :P I hope that season 2 will be as spectacular as the first one ! I can't wait to see that !

Anyway, you wrote very well this one and, I don't remember if I read another story of yours but, you should write more about OUT ! ;)

Good continuation !

Goutt2mer

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loved it!

I loved it. There are no august/Emma stories out there really. Plz continue

Please tell me there is a sequel! PLEASE! At least in the thought process! I love this, this is amazingly awesometastical! It's so good it makes me want to say the longest nonscientific word I know, which happens to be: antidisestablishmentarism. Yes, a real word that has nothing to do with this story other than being really long and awesome for that purpose alone.

Wow! That was amazing! I just rewatched the episode.. this is fantastically written, and it flows right in with the story. I hope they write in some August/Emma in the tv show. I'm glad I'm not the only one!

I love it, please, keep it

I loved this entire story (apart from the kiss, but that's only because I'm still a crazy Graham/Emma shipper, if it weren't for that it'd be cute) and I really hope you continue it.

Yeah, that's my worst nightmare, by the way: giant, creepy, life-size, evil puppet August.

I'm glad there seems to be some more August/Emma stories coming out. I'm kind of beginning to like these two. Great job! Loved it!

It has a nice subtlety to it...slow and enough sweet for a good August/Emma oneshot or more. So hard telling what's going to happen next with the season finale coming up.

totally loved it

This is great! Ive been waiting for a story like this!:D I LOVE August/Emma so much! I really wish something like this had happened on the show:) Keep going!:D

very nice ..i like the clash of the warring emotions here between Emma and august .