This would be emotional and less ridiculous if they couldn't reach the boat due to the storm and she showed Bella wallowing in turmoil and to have a back and forth then have a declaration from Edward before charging into the storm is so superficial and ridiculous.

What an amazing story! Loved it! I don't know how I'm just reading this!

Nevermind, I take it back, just after Edward redeemed himself and was almost perfect, he leaves Bella when her dad is dying, not cool! I like how you made Bella a very understanding, compromising person unlike me cause I would not be ok with that lol!

I got to say, didn't think it would happen but Edward has redeemed himself, ok I like you now :)

You're making it angsty and realistic just like real life and thats why it's so good and relatable, I hate stories that are so unrealistic and sappy and make you think "yeah real love is not that easy!'. I am definitely an angsthoor. Also, I know a lot of readers are bothered when you have more promiscious characters that have pasts with others, but thats one thing I love about your stories that you're not afraid to show that, which is hard to come by for many stories on here! I love your work!

So my past reviews have mainly been me bitching and whining but thats because I do really love this story and it's making me feel so many different emotions but thats what you want from a reader! I am not critisizing this story at all! I love the direction you're taking it and that all my questions or frustrations are being answered and explained in future chapters.

she didn't think Edward was gonna go eight months without having sex with other people when he never committed to her or promised her anything, did she?

So he can fuck maria and chelsea but she can't date mike?!

So has he not caught any feelings for her yet even though he knows she has or is he just in denial? I hope she has a bf when he comes back!

omg yes, exactly what I wanted, they're gonna get it on with Alice and Jasper, I love your kink!
A few rants first though, cause I'm still annoyed by Edward.
Firstly, he's such a hyprocrite, he flaunts girls in her face, she has to constantly be reminded of his past and he won't commit to her but then he's so possessive and like he has ownership over her when he just see's her "hugging" another guy?
Also, if he really wanted to keep in touch with Bella while he was away, he could, he could get a phone or use jaspers phone to contact her.
Lastly, she's crazy, she would actually wait a whole year for him hoping that he will eventually want to settle down when he told her he never will, come on, she's smarter than that and she shouldn't stay single and just wait for him to come back every year just to be his fuck buddy!

Ah I wish Jacob was single so Bella could give Edward a taste of his own medicine and make him jealous. Girl, why are you catching feelings? Play him like he's playing you!
I hope she doesn't just fall in his hands like putty and makes him works for it so he's finally the one chasing after her. I know this bella is strong and fierce so I hope she shows it!
Also, I actually like that this story has them both having colorful sex lives, it's realistic and refreshing and there is enough stories out there where they're both vanilla. I find this so hot, even when they tease eachother with other people! And hope we get to see more kinky scenes like that jasper and alice scene!

Reread this...again...that's about a dozen times now. I cry at the end each time. I'm sure I'll cry when I read it for the 13th time too.

Thank you again, gurl!
Jada D'Lee

Thanks for sharing your story. I really enjoyed reading it.
I would have loved more on Edward's return. I would have enjoyed reading the reunions first hand.

This was so sweet. I couldnt put this story down. I do hope you will finish After Jane Died someday . I loved that story.

This was a lovely story. Good job!