Hey, I haven't even bothered to read this story yet, but I'm going to, because I used to love Harry Potter and I love reading and writing erotica. My husband was given a flash drive, and it was supposed to just have movies on it... But somehow, someway, this story was saved onto it. So I looked you up. LOL! Just wanted to tell you that your story was loved enough for someone to save it!

I've always like both Fleur and Gabby. Especially together with Harry! Now if they and the others can help destroy both Dork Lards so much the better! Better yet, if they and any other girl(s) can totally destroy the myth of Fumblemort being a truly great man, then the magical world would be on the road to a n extremely brighter future!

This just proves that Fumblemort needs to pay for ALL his dirty deeds! He thinks nothing of RAPE, MURDER, EXTORTION, and let's not forget TORTURE of his own family! He thinks there's nothing wrong with erasing memories even forceably RAPING a child! The old fraud has gone even DARKER than the so called DARKEST of DARK LORDS Riddle! And the worst part is he thinks he's doing all this for the greater good of the magical world! When all he's truly done is limit the number of magicals that could work in the ministry.

I'd hope before too much longer that the rest of Harry's girls join him in his sexual romps fairly soon. As for Fumblemort, I hope he meets a very bad end long before the end of the story. After all, it's gonna take a lot of very hard work to straighten out the mess Fumblemort's made of the magical world of England. And he's gonna need a shit ton of help to do it! He'll also need to destroy the myth of the great Fumblemort as well. So he's got his work cut out for him. Fortunately, he's already got help in the form off his bond mates.

By Merlins' hairy balls! If they keep this up, they'll kill themselves with this feedback loop! But, WHAT A WAY TO GO! Of course that throw a right spanner in then works for sure! :-)

I've read the original of this as well as this rewrite and enjoyed both. Though I hope by the end Fumblemort gets what's coming to him. Meaning, that special ward of his at Hogwarts gets taken out of the wards totally and he looses everything he owns including all his gold. I really wouldn't put it past him to be stealing form the Potter Family Vaults while not telling Harry about them. I was reading one where Dumbles allowed ALL the Disorder members, as well as just about anyone else who wanted to, take everything from the Potter Family vault. They left him with one Knut on the Main Potter vault floor. Anything not wanted was destroyed. Well, Harry did a runner out of the country to Japan and started up an electronics company that made him the richest person in the world. Magical and muggle. I'll have to find it again to finish it. Even Hermione turned on Harry for the Potter Library. So I look at good ol' Fumblemort as the Primary Dark Lord masquerading as the Leader of the Light. There really is very little difference between the two Dark Lords.

is this updated on any of the other sites?

Please update

A quite interesting tale. Please update soon.

What's next, Sirius/Myrtle/Gray Lady?

This is great can’t wait for more

Good chapter looking forward to reading the next chapter of this story. On a personal note unfortunately I can’t donate because right now I’m in between jobs and have no money myself to give sorry.

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. Sorry if I am annoying you with my reviews it's just that I really like your stories.

Good chapter update soon plz

Nice chapter

like that there is a possibility for lavander to join the family. Would be a shame to split her from pansy.

Wonder if sally ann found out who her farther really was before the end

love a good "dumbles is the dark lord of the prophecy" twist. And this is definitely a good one.

Wonder if harry can help the inlaws with their Spike problem. Only fair, as they look to be helping with his dark lord issue.