Loving these deleted scenes!

Thanks for that
Loved the punch line ;b

Gah, the ending! Poor Jo lol! Well, maybe Dean just imagined it, but you never know... Anyways, I've always liked Jo, but I never felt like Dean felt the same way about her that she did about him. And gotta love Ellen! :) Nice work.

Hot Damn! love it

Shit, indeed. Someday soon I am going to start reading your fantastic deleted scenes all over in order. Great job on the physical (ahem) stuff- dang.

Impressed as always,

JamesParker

The sex was absolutely perfect. Nfff. I have a kink for Dean calling Sam 'baby boy,' so thanks for that. Guh. Just. Ugh. Everything about your deleted scenes is just so wonderful. Someone asked me what my Supernatural headcanon was the other day on tumblr and I just linked them to your fics because they're so complete in every way.

Its official. This is my favorite alternate verse. Everything you do is perfect. Never stop writing, even if its not gay porn and brother feels.

Be still my damn heart. This was beautiful. And HAWT! And OMG, what was with the ending? LOL I mean, that totally shocked me! Ah ha ha Jo. I love her and all but still. Ah hahahaha. Anyway, there were a few things I wanted to point out in this that I particularly loved. For one, I thought it was ironic and awesome that Dean was thinking about how he's the only one who gets to call Sam a freak. Because eventually Dean is the only one Sam really can't stand to hear that from. Oh boys! And I love love love the whole "We don't really do that" thing was priceless. Dean's amusement at that made me giggle. And poor Sammy blushing and stuttering. Awwww! And I adored when drunk Sammy was stumbling with Dean guiding him and he slurred "You smell good" heeheeheehee I love intoxicated Sammy. And Dean poking and licking Sam's dimples. *melt* You're amazing. And oh my good god, that sex was slow and emotional and incredible and hot as hell! Dean hitting his prostate and lingering there? I seriously almost just died. I loved your explanation about why neither of them can hold out very long with each other too. It's easy to hold out and build up stamina when you're with a nameless, faceless set of boobs. But when you're with your soulmate, it's almost too much to handle. Dean's right. Jo's nice but she isn't Sam and that's all he needs to know. Loved that line too. This entire tag was incredible. Sam's sadness and fear and relief that Dean feels the fear too. Dealing with that crap by turning to each other. That's one of my favorite things about the boys. And Ellen was right one in this. "You interested in my daughter?" "She's off limits. Keep your weapons holstered and we'll all get along just fine." Hahahaha! Loved that! I find Dean's fear of her endearing. There's just so much about this one that I love and I could go on and on and on. But it's too much! Lmao! I can't wait for the No Exit tag. You rock my world, bb. Thanks so much for this. I read it three times so far and I know this is one that I'm going to keep going back to again and again. *hugs*

Wonderful! You have such a remarkable way of writing that your tags just seamlessly blend into the episode.

This was perfectly done!

Loved it!

Nice job. :D I really liked the way you opened up the story cause Jo and Ellen are very interesting characters. Than there were the cute moments and the hot ones too. Although the whole thing about Adam kinda got lost later...

I found the bit on how Dean likes Sam's dimples to be...too cute. :) This story wasn't as heavily reliant on the dialogue of the episode, which is a good improvement. Use that creative license and tweak the storyline a bit, put your own little twist. I'm curious if the ending of this one impacts the next in some way. Overall, i really like the way you've been able to establish their relationship and am looking forward to future eps where things get more complicated. Cause you've been able to nail those emotions perfectly. Keep up the great work!