very good story

This is a clever concept and I did enjoy the story!

Nice one. Love the descriptive languagw!

Your writing would be more enjoyable to read if you'd stop trying to show your audience how vast your vocabulary is, and focus instead on achieving clarity through simplicity.

This has been a very nice story. I would enjoy reading a sequel. Even though we know how it turns out, it would be nice to read it through :-) Thank you for writing this.

This is a really good story

Wow - I wonder how the next school year went. I wonder if Kreacher was able to keep Fletcher from stealing the locket. I wonder if they had an easier time finding the horcruxes. I wonder if they managed to mess up the timeline even more...

Interesting if a bit mushy. I always like it when the characters get a better future.

damn Snape. Cold.

I wanted to bring forth a fact. Harry, after his stressful...let's say 'confrontation' with his uncle, said it'd only been three weeks since Sirius died. If I remember correctly, Albus and Sirius' deaths were almost a year apart. So riddle me this, how can Harry dream of his memory of Albus dying at the hand of Severus, when he is still alive and it's barely been a month since Sirius died? I don't mean to critique, but this must be said. I deeply apologize for any emotional distress I have caused through this, but I felt it must be done.

~Zin

This was made forever ago, but I have something to say. Um, small thing. I read Harry's dream, and Albus died in it. But, miraculously, he's talking to Severus, whose tending to Harry the next morning. Just saying, I was confused. Please clear this up.

I'd say please write a sequel!

I haven't checked yet if you have written a sequel, but even if you hadn't, this was a good enough ending! loved this story! instantly in my favorites! XD (hearts)

To try and translate Ron's words through a mouthful of cookies, I believe he said: "I thought he would never finish." Although at first I thought he was complementing the cookies, but . . . you get used to speaking and listening to others with food in their mouths when you study during lunch breaks. Or when you live among a bunch of hicks and rednecks :)

Lovely story!