You write such long chapters! I don't know how you do it. I don't read a lot of Jorrie, but your writing is so good. I need to get myself caught up on this lovely story!

I was trying to think of a good comparison for Bmf and then it came to me it's like one of those really great tv dramas that come every few months but can't help but wait and then watch with anticipation and delight

another amazingly brilliantly wrote chapter you certainly put the roman in romantic (see what I did there)

Although it did look like Torrie was going to kill john at one point but luckily he seems to have a nack for gd surprises and manage to save himself

really great chapter looking forward to the next one

Update Soon!

There may only be an update every few months but the quality of the story never seems to differ

I do love how you write john and torrie they have there problems and issues but there love always radiates from the page

amazing chapter cannot wait until the next one (especially with Stephanie in it ;)))))

Update soon!

(Ps I will have my laptop back by time you update next so will be a lot easier to read and review :))

Matt

Make torrie pregnant

Hey Kelly

Loving this story and so happy that there was an update. Looking forward to the next one.

Sheree xXx

Firstly Happy Belated Birthday! Hope u had an awesome birthday!

Secondly Thank you for the super awesome update! It rocked!

Thirdly I gota say john was just sooo cute and adorable in this chapter suprising her with the flowers. Awww man. The were just sooo cute!

Roman reigns is HOTT! Whew ... but my johnny boy will always come 1st.
John vs brock scarry as hell. But he will do his best just hope brock doesnt win coz I dont like him esp after he ended the streak.

Awesome chap and thanx!

I'm in love with this story! Keep updating!

Another amazing chapter my princess Kelly! Sorry for the hiatus between reviews, but things are crazy. I promised though that I would read and review week so here I am!

Oh boy! Torrie returning to WWE! How amazing would that actually be if that happened!? Alas, I can read her return here and that will tide me over! I love the hairdresser here. Such a catty lady. Typical of a hair stylist to gossip about her clients. You nailed that lol.

AND OH MY GOODNESS AT THE END! Poor Torrie being attacked by Tensai. I was on the edge of my seat reading wondering what he'd do! And then he picked her up! But of course prince charming, the super hero, Torrie's savior, John Cena wouldn't let harm come to her! I MEAN AWWWW! He broke her fall! Such a romantic and beautiful moment!

I said this before and I will say it till I'm blue in the face, but you write Jorrie like no one else can and that's perfectly!

Loved this update!

-Kylie!

It's me again! Reading on my lunch break! Couldn't think of a better way to spend my time than reading your beautiful stories.

This was such a tragic and at the same time beautiful chapter. How Torrie must have felt watching John collapse before her eyes! You described it so perfectly. I could envision it in my head. Poor thing. Of course John would resist medical attention, the big dumb hero lol.

A bonus Cody Rhodes! That was unexpected but I loved it ha.

The bits with John teasing Torrie about Stewie was cute! "He's gonna blow up soon." "He loves his food" so funny!

I just love it! Torrie always going to be there for her hero! 3

oops just realized I reviewed the wrong chapter ha. This review is for chapter 3 so hope this doesn't confuse you :P

Kelly, surprise! I'm not sure if I've read some of this story before or not, but if I have oh well. Better starting from the beginning!

This first chapter was beautiful. Your writing is beautiful. No one can quite capture the love and heart of Jorrie more than you can. It was so wonderful.

My favorite line was this: "He loved her for who she is. John's there whenever she needs someone. As soon as she starts to slip, John's arms embrace and surround her." THAT WAS SUCH A SWEET DESCRIPTION!

Beautifully done miss Kelly. Can't wait until I can read some more!

Love, Kylie 3

Ahh! Update soon please!

Hey Kelly

So so so sweet. I love this story. They really are the perfect couple.

Sheree xXx

Hey Kelly

Aww such a sweet ending to this chapter. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Sheree xXx

Hey Kelly

Loved this chapter, Torrie is so sweet. Looking forward to the next one.

Sheree xXx

Hey Kelly

Loving this story and looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Sheree xXx