I enjoyed this very much. There's a bunch of stuff I liked but without giving anything away to those who read reviews I'll just say that. The summary for this drew me in and I'm just so glad I found this story. How are you writers so talented?!

This is an amazing story I knew a few chapters in this would be amazing how you described the first time he met Bella in school no one has ever done such a great job just describing the lure of her blood like you did

I loved this!

Good that Riley was able to come back into vegetarian vampire life and to get into being a journalist. Thank you for the good storytelling and sharing your talent.

Bella's smoother/calmer sooner than usual transition is partly because she has a relationship with Alice and Edward already established. Also realizing that the Cullens were not human before Victoria's attack, likely helped make the transition less of a shock. Interesting comparing Bella's and Riley's adaption, the foreknowledge helps.

good ending for Victoria. Bella's last words were great.

Wonderful descriptions of how overwhelmed she is at first with all the input.

Wow! didn't expect getting two new vampires. Riley so close to graduation, hope once calms down that he could do the journalist work. Hope we see the end of Victoria.

so interesting that they are taking a supernatural lit class together. Renee helps too.

Mrs Cope...how sad. Wonder who else and the pack not wanting help from the Cullens. Nice twist with James looking for Alice.

maybe Jasper gets info on Bella's feelings.

yes, just let Edward go forward without your visions Alice.

Alice was a little slow on that score. Edward can do it.

and that is why a quiet mind to him is just right for his mate.

oh...this is different. kinda sad, I'm a canon couple reader. Hope you get them together eventually some how.