amazing amazing story! loved everything about it ;_; now you need to continue it :3

Loved this! It made me cry, so job well done. :)

I absolutely loved this story. Your style of writing is beautiful, I really appreciated your attention to detail and the delicateness of your descriptions. You should be really proud of this. Looking forward to seeing more writing from you

OMG...this is too perfect. Tragic and angsty and yet all the characters remain hopeful despite the dire circumstances. You really do write some of the best P/O fics in the fandom. I always love your stories.

The nickname "Bullet" is too adorable and of course Peter would be the one to give it to her. And a second baby...a little boy perhaps? I hope you do continue this story, maybe jump forward to when Olivia gives birth? As always, great job!

This is wonderful Invariant! I cannot wait to see where you take this next!

Please update when you can!

Thanks,

~ZeusFluff~

I'm becoming a real fan of your fanfics. I just love all of them.

This one is bittersweet. Everything about Peter and Olivia having to relay Etta to Nina (the before, the during, the afterwards) is painful, it hurts as bad as a paper cut, as a kick in a pinky toe...you can't avoid the tears coming to you eyes.

But it's wonderfully narrated, full of feelings, of sweet images of them with their little baby girl.

Also bittersweet is the consolation sex (I approve the T rating, not giving too much detail, but with enough sensuality), but in the end there's hope and their abiding love.

"all four of us"

ALL FOUR OF US!

;_;

That's not fair! I had already stopped crying over this episode.

omg this was just gorgeous *sobbing forever* your fics are amazing, this was no exception. Loved the way you interpreted the bullet. You have a beautiful way with words, I hope you continue to write because you're so talented!

You broke me. You just simply and purely broke me. I don't even have it in me to ramble and flail endlessly like I usually do because I just want to curl up under my covers and stay there all day long. This was GORGEOUS, and it hurt so much, and it was so believable and in character and painful and skljfksljf I just can't deal with it. I mean you had me weeping, and then you had me fanning myself (still crying) and then I was weeping again. I mean, it's not bad enough that they had to give up Etta to protect her, but then, YOU MADE HER BE PREGNANT AGAIN.

I just saw you hadn't labelled it as 'Complete', DOES IT MEAN MORE TO COME? Though I'm not sure I want to know what you think might have happened to Olivia and their new baby, since we didn't see her in 4x19.

God woman how do you do this. Just like Etta, you hit me right in the heart, every single time. I am going to start calling you Bullet *sobbing forever*

Fantastic work honey, seriously, you know how much I admire your writing. Keep going, I can take it (well, kinda HAHAHA). THANK YOU!

*Elialys*