Great description of a closely knit team that we all cherish...I really like your smooth flowing narration :)

Enjoyed Peter's perspective of the people who inhabit his world. He is the glue who holds them all together.

I really loved your observations. Peter's perspective and character study was touching and captured very well.

The only thing that I would recomment is to do a little bit more revising, by yourself or with a beta, because there were some run-on sentences that made me re-read a couple passages.

In any case, I really did like the story. Thanks for sharing.

Nicely observed. I love how proud Peter is of his team, and how much they all respect him.

I bet you can guess which bit I liked best?

Yup - Peter's honesty in recognising El as the most important member of all.

You got in a smart character profile of Peter at the end - he would want Clinton and Diana to move onwards and upwards and prove themselves and their abilities. He's not the kind of guy to feel threatened - just proud!

This is very nice. I especially liked Peter's observations about Diana!

Well done.