Cliffhanger, awesome! Well-worth the wait since we got to see this battle- fav of mine btw for sure- and wow, many deaths in the Career pack make things very interesting from now on! Too bad for Natalie and Lily, but the scene in the forest was beautiful. :)

McGonagall is actually 96 years old.

Awesome, I really liked this chapter. The discussion on ethics was very interesting, and so was the way you found to put the Tale of the Three Brothers in. Can't wait to read what happends now the Carreers are here. Do me a favour and keep Olida alive, please... *puppy eyes*

Oh, and the Logic-Riddle, high five, man, it's a classic one.

YAY finally managed to read this and hell, it was wearth the wait! The siblings are together again and now that will be interesting, I wonder how you're going to handle it. And wow, the Capital has made mutts that specifically attack magic, see how that works out for them. But how did they find out about the magic? Hope we'll meet again with the Careers soon :)

Actually, McGonagall was born in 1935, and this story is set in 2020, presuming Lily was born in 2007 and is now 13, so by that logic McGonagall would indeed be 85 (I was one year off). I've taken a lot of liberties in this story, such as the years between the three kids and ignoring the fact McGonagall retired in the late 2010s

I highly doubt that Professor McGonagall is 84 years of age. . Good story! :)

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid if her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a monday night at 12:00a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes u will have the best day of ur life tomorrow. u will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. in 53 mins someone will say i love you or im dirt

YAY! Upload and about the Careers, Im flying here! Really nice chapter, interesting plot moves, Olida being undermined by just a few of the other Carrers and the character insight is great. PLus some humour for good measure and yes, Im sick but smiling :)
Cheers

Wow I got a mail that you updated, but it didn't tell me it would be awesome! A lot of action and Lily's psychological condition in the beginning, thinking she can still feel the dead boy... That was cool! And the idea with those snakes gave me the creeps! Just a question these muts can be heard by anyone and just Lily was the closest, or it has to do with Parseltongue?Cause Natalie said she heard them hissing, not saying spesigic words...Btw i keep thinking of her as Luna... It weird!
P.S.: Whatever looks easy in the Arena is hazardous. Just stay away!

Very nice the plot thickens and we still have the cliffhanger from 12!

Hello again and apologies for any inconvinience I have brought you. Thank you for the information and the time you invested in answering. You're right an account is coming my way, but first i have to fix some things at my story. I would appreciate your thoughts on it when the time comes-maybe in two months! :) I most centainly will continue enjoying your story. Hope you update soon and sorry again.

To MissLestrange: It's no bother at all, it's nice that you express an interest in the story. Yes, I did come up with those names myself. I looked at known names from certain Districts so based them on those. For example, males from D2 commonly have quite Roman/Shakespearean names (e.g. Brutus, Cato) so I chose Marcus, and people from D1 have quite fancy, extravagant names, hence Dynamo (taken from 'dynamic') and Angora (a high quality wool). I recommend random/ if you're looking for a specific kind of name. I also recommend making yourself an account if you have any more questions so that I can PM you the answers, but I appreciate your questions very much so thank you and I hope you enjoy all further instalments .

Hello again and thank you for taking the time to answer my question. Yes, it does and from that I can understand you have put effort in that story-the plot must be complex too. Then also you are sticking to the books and keeping them Americans. But did you come up with those names yourself? Because I've never heard most of them before, though I'm not English so I could be missing something. If so they are very nice and suited. Anyway keep up the good work I can't wait to read more! :)

This is to answer the question of MissLestrage since she was reviewing as a guest: Being from the UK, I'm not an expert on American accents, but I understand that there isn't really a 'posh' American accent since there's no history of aristocracy in America. I would say that I imagine Olida speaking in a well pronounced, intelligent sounding American accent which often sounds quite cold and threatening. However, I think that in fits of rage, her well-spoken nature loses to her anger, hence her language at Eric. Hope that answered your question, and thank you very much for the review.

Why that was amazing honestly one of the best stories I have read here!The character, original or not, are cool, the storyline very interesting and your wrirting style quite pleasant. Cant wait for more-poor Lily must be having a difficult time now...
P.S.:How do you intonate Olida? :))