Hi! I’m writing a similar story and I hope you’ll give it a chance! It’s still a work in progress and Kirk has many on her side compared to yours. Let me know what you think! I’d love to hear from you!
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just like jane, i feel so betrayed. this is NOT reality, this is FANFICTION!
wish some writers will remember. a sequel should be incorporated somehow
with the enterprise getting them to the past just 2 weeks before and have
her speak to jane/herself earlier. i think if she knew earlier his intent, she
would have prevented this. bad ending.

NOOOOOOOO!

Congratulations.
This story fucked me up for days. Probably for the rest of my life. Just thought you should know.

Yeah, I know it's been a while since you finished this story, but if you ever decide to do a sequel, how about incorporating time travel into it? This is Captain J. T. Kirk, nonbeliever of the No Win scenario, after all, and not some helpless little ole' thing. Doesn't seem at all like her to just give up on something, or someone, important and precious to her-With the Universe seemingly WANTING them to be together, maybe she could end up getting a little help, somehow?

Regardless of whether you decide to write more about this particular universe, it was a good, entertaining story, and I thank you for writing it.

Goodbye.

I dont understand forgiving Bones and not forgiving Spock. They betrayed her in a different way but they still betrayed her.

Im sort of like this Jane. The difference between us is, i dont forgive and forget. My mom and i didnt talk for a year UNTIL she apologized. I shunned my uncle for 15 years and didnt go to his funeral. I divorced my husband for his mistake.

Like i said, i dont let other people, no matter what place they are in my life injure me so that i cant function. Im always good in letting people go. If i make a decision, even if it hurts, i stand by it.

you bleeding sodding meanie I wanted them to forgive.

Wow there are no words to describe what I'm feeling...this was just horrible. This was really not a good ending. It felt rushed and lacked creativity and description. And I'm not just saying that because of the crap ending ...tragic ending I mean. If that's the ending fine but perhaps you should have written an alternative ending or something.

What a terrible ending... Like wow that was just horrible

So sad an ending. I had hoped she got there in time

Oh. My. Gosh. This. Made. Me. Cry. It. Was. So. Freakin. Sad.

Why would you do?! : It is Cruel! Worst ending ever!

wow, i...i did not expect that. great job!

Update immediately, please!

I don't particularly care for your ending; but, you're the author and fully entitled to carry your storyline wherever you wish. However, I do take exception to your genre categories. Using "Romance & Hurt/Comfort" categories in genre gives the impression that this story will have at least a neutral ending. And you could have ended it at chapter 17 without introducing a tragic character death. Still, I think that using the genre "Angst" or "Tragedy" would have better prepared readers for this story and especially it's ending.