Heh, Oh I can't wait to watch Ino finally understand what hardship and training are actually supposed to be about!

Yeah, saved again!

ohhhhh snap!
:ooooooo thy can not wait for thee next chapitor~
Keep up the good work!

Hmmm... thinking.. thinking... RAWR
*sigh* happy reunion between brother and sister 3

Aww, cute sasusaku moment x3 soooo fluffy
LEGASP! Naughty Zabu! You ruined the moment with your impeccable timing *insert mad face*

This makes no sense to me, how did Haku suddenly get a feeling Sakura is related? :/
I think Zabuza would be a 'tiny' bit more hostile if Haku were to say something like that... they took the job for money ;v
Also ';' aren't necessary, they can be replaced with ','. This may be outdated advice. x3

Overall this isn't a bad fiction, keep it up!

Man was she ever stupid to think that someone like Doto would leave a loose end like her around.

A traitor receiving a traitor's death, did Yukie really think that Doto would let live someone who betrayed her own father? Bad guys are never thrusted, and those who sold their family even less.

Please update again soon i can't wait to read the next chapter, I really want to know what happens next.

Well that was certainly a twist I did not see coming. Sakura actually being in line for the throne of Snow, Yukie helping to murder her own father and Doto... You know, I could understand him wanting the fox's chakra, but him wanting Naruto was truly surprising. I guess he's just one of those that loves power and taming it.

Yeah Zabuza's advice was right, but Shika was at least attempting to keep calm and keep his temper in check when he finally reached his boiling point with Ino's whining. At least he snapped here and not on the field or actual battle. And maybe now Ino can do something helpful in the mission instead of just being dead weight.

Oh now that is a twist I did not expect. At least certainly not this soon.

Hm, very interesting changes to the canon story. It's definitely the first time I've seen someone have Sakura and Haku related. I'm really enjoying it.

Please update again soon I can’t wait to read the next chapter please hurry I really want to know what happens next

I just wanted to say thank you for the updates, it is really impressive how often you have updated recently, and I really appreciate it :)