Reviews for Shepherdess
the8horcrux chapter 3 . 9/23/2019
Pretty good, sad that it's abandoned.
SoulofEssence chapter 3 . 4/25/2014
I really like this story please keep writing I love the bayern books and this is such a great idea if your going to keep writing then you should keep writing :)
Haili73 chapter 3 . 4/3/2014
Ah! you can't leave me on a cliff hanger like that! Keep writing!
Lucy Taylor chapter 3 . 3/17/2014
OMGOMGOMG! I love it!

Goose Girl is one of my favorite books of all time, and I *love* this twist you've put to Hale's concept of nature-speaking.

Your writing is also really good! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I also like how you made it so that Alianna (that was her name, right?) knew Finn, Enna, Razo, Conrad and the rest before Isi - or Ani - was even on the scene. I think it adds that much more life to the story because I can really imagine things at that time more vividly.

All in all, I love it!

Keep writing!

Lucy
moonlight46 chapter 3 . 2/17/2014
This is amazing!
Hunter of the Dark chapter 3 . 8/20/2012
This is really good! It reminds me of "Avatar the Last Airbender" I am excited to see where this goes!
SparksofBravery chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
This is great so far! Please continue!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
neh, are you going to continue this story? its actually quite good for just a beginning...