I love the fact that you made them more like cats than people. My favorite was the grooming such genius! You don't see that in most and I think that was what made your story so unique so bravo! I think most of the people that read your story will enjoy it as much as me and I speak for all your fans when I say we expect more great things from you!

lindo

It was nice to see a vulnerable side of Tygra—which he keeps well hidden by his snarkiness. Very sweet.

Very well done. I loved how much passion you were able to put into their interactions, especially considering it was all post-coital. The brief reference to how wild they had been shortly before made it all the more compelling that things were still so hot between them, while at the same time sweet, gentle and slow due to fatigue.

Also have to give you kudos for not making Cheetara submissive, as some fanfics tend to make her a wilting flower before the utter manliness of Tigra, while we know from the series it is his soft side she especially likes. Anyone who has seen real cats courting also knows the female tends to give as good as she gets. I do admit to some bias for liking it when the female is forceful. Having Tigra be willing to show some vulnerability to her was quite meaningful as well given his pride.

On another note I liked the various bestial qualities you gave to their interactions, the grooming, reference to being in heat (though she wasn't in heat in the story) and such made this much more exotic than stories that make the characters act just like humans.

I liked your story as it builds nicely into what little we've seen of their relationship in successive Thundercats episodes. Even as quiet an unassuming as it's been with them after Ep. 14, simply standing near each other or placing a comforting hand over the other's shoulder. There should be more stories like this :)

Tygra and Cheetara's relationship felt completely tacked on at the end of "Between Brothers," so you make up for that by further exploring the relationship. And you did an astounding job. Really, you did. :-)